Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 102 "God's Rest assured"Musings of an old man - 2022
34 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Virtual six for the beloved Queen of Hearts. She was so full of devotion, love and grace. I deeply feel her absence. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Virtual six for the beloved Queen of Hearts. She was so full of devotion, love and grace. I deeply feel her absence. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Sally!
Comment from Gloria ....
Great artwork and a fine naani. The Queen was ever present through most of our lives, and her self-sacrifice and dedication to service and duty is second to none.
Very well done and great luck to you in the voting booth.
Gloria
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Great artwork and a fine naani. The Queen was ever present through most of our lives, and her self-sacrifice and dedication to service and duty is second to none.
Very well done and great luck to you in the voting booth.
Gloria
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Michaela Moore
I am delighted by everything in this poem. The choice of the playing card queen of hearts spliced with the King, your font choice, and your words. Lovely job of this whole piece.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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I am delighted by everything in this poem. The choice of the playing card queen of hearts spliced with the King, your font choice, and your words. Lovely job of this whole piece.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Michaela, thank you for your supportive validation on this Naani.
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, the world observed and respected the life and faith, and selfless service of the Queen, and she has now entered her eternal rest. I like the way you incorporated the words of the National Anthem, and the image is cleverly done. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Yes, the world observed and respected the life and faith, and selfless service of the Queen, and she has now entered her eternal rest. I like the way you incorporated the words of the National Anthem, and the image is cleverly done. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Wendy, I do appreciate your comments and validation.
Comment from karenina
A topical Naani, one of respect to the late monarch, who devoted her life to service for seventy plus years.
Clever card there, Queen/King.
And now we see how Charles III handles his reign!
Karenina
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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A topical Naani, one of respect to the late monarch, who devoted her life to service for seventy plus years.
Clever card there, Queen/King.
And now we see how Charles III handles his reign!
Karenina
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Thank you!
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Welcome!
Comment from Jasmine Girl
You are so right about Queen Elizabeth II. She was such an exemplary person for all of us. She served her kingdom all the way to the end of her long life of 96.
I found cursive is hard to read.
Good luck.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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You are so right about Queen Elizabeth II. She was such an exemplary person for all of us. She served her kingdom all the way to the end of her long life of 96.
I found cursive is hard to read.
Good luck.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Thanks for the feedback
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I was wondering about your. I'm glad you are back.
Comment from DeboraDyess
Your contest entry looks perfect - the syllable count is spot on and the topic is both human and current.
It IS a lesson we should all take into account and accept as a challenge.
Blessings and best in the contest,
Deb
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Your contest entry looks perfect - the syllable count is spot on and the topic is both human and current.
It IS a lesson we should all take into account and accept as a challenge.
Blessings and best in the contest,
Deb
Comment Written 20-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Deb, thank you!
Comment from Aussie
Well done poet. Using the Queen of Hearts was a clever move for your Naani. Never has a Queen been so loved, adored from afar. All around the world they came. Three million people, just to say farewell Elizabeth. K XX
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Well done poet. Using the Queen of Hearts was a clever move for your Naani. Never has a Queen been so loved, adored from afar. All around the world they came. Three million people, just to say farewell Elizabeth. K XX
Comment Written 20-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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K thank you!
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
Well said !!
This is a universal time of mourning, for the Queen's death, but also for the woman she was.
No matter your political affliction or monarchy acceptance, she was in the end a woman.
One who honored her duty, and family, protected her country, and inspired millions of people through her grace and perseverance.
Great post.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Well said !!
This is a universal time of mourning, for the Queen's death, but also for the woman she was.
No matter your political affliction or monarchy acceptance, she was in the end a woman.
One who honored her duty, and family, protected her country, and inspired millions of people through her grace and perseverance.
Great post.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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K.L. a long-lived example of selfless humility and service, that sorely will never be replaced.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
powerful, short Naani poem about the queen, and her last days. and what does the end of her life mean for the world and the queen's role in the world.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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powerful, short Naani poem about the queen, and her last days. and what does the end of her life mean for the world and the queen's role in the world.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Jake