Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Goodness, Alexandra can be a little toughie! I wondered if you had to do much research to know how the law/lawyer works. You have done a great job researching her duties that she has to do~

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022

Yes, I did research on lawyers, plus I know some. Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Zue65

Excellent

I have always enjoyed your stories and I missed them for more than four years that I have left Fan Story. But I am starting to find my way back to writing. I enjoyed the theme of your story about women abused by men like Pat Rogers. I will wait for the next post. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022

Thank you for the kind review and welcome back. I can't wait to read your work.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, Barbara,

I enjoyed reading your story. The plot is believable, it could be real life. It moved along nicely and the plot was easy to understand and follow. Good character development.

Well done, my friend.

Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus

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 Comment Written 16-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022

Thank you for the encouragement.

Comment from John Ciarmello

Excellent

I believe I might have missed a chapter! Regardless I fell right back into it! Ali is a tough cookie and about to get tougher with Lisa's pregnancy. A great chapter. Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from JoannaN

Excellent

I like the fact that Alexandra Black is so professional when at work (she can stay calm and contained), yet she has also a great dose of empathy.
She seems to be a likeable character. I am curious what is going to happen next.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022

Thank you for the kind review. I hope you drop by again.

reply by JoannaN on 15-Nov-2022

I will (I have just added your book to my bookcase)

Comment from eliz100

Excellent

This is another excellent chapter. The movement of the plot was very interesting. I do not see any room for improvement. I look forward to the next chapter. I know I need some words to meet the requirements

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Crystal Gamet

Exceptional

Fantastic job!!! I can not wait to read more! This is the first chapter that I have read of your book but I am going to have to find the rest here. You are a very talented storyteller.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022

Thank you for the encouragement.

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

It's always a pleasure when the deserving win and the evil get what they have coming to them, but now, Lisa being pregnant, I don't guess there is a winner in this one. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Can think of better things to hold onto besides semen-stained undies.

Well, the plot gets deeper and deeper.

Now with another mouth to feed guess Alexandra will make sure it does not go hungry.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Exceptional

That was brilliant, Barb, and so well written. Raped women should get the compensation this slimeball is being forced to pay. I hate men like that, who think they can have sex whenever they feel like it, with women who are blackmailed into it. That is rape. It's good that there are more decent men around than there are men like Pat Roger. Well done, Barbara! :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022

Thank you for the encouragement.