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A 3-line poem20 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Congratulationson the win here! This is a stunning presentation with words that fan the flames of this poet, for sure! Sorry I have missed so many reviews as I recover from this darn fall. I did want to be sure to stop by and congratulate you!
Karenina
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
Congratulationson the win here! This is a stunning presentation with words that fan the flames of this poet, for sure! Sorry I have missed so many reviews as I recover from this darn fall. I did want to be sure to stop by and congratulate you!
Karenina
Comment Written 24-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
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Thank you so very much, taking care of yourself is most important, please stay well****kahpot
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Thanks, I'm trying!
Comment from D H Goulden
Kahpot, your precision with words is to be admired. I love the imagery and underlying emotion in the poem. Congratulations, a well-deserved win for you!
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
Kahpot, your precision with words is to be admired. I love the imagery and underlying emotion in the poem. Congratulations, a well-deserved win for you!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Thank you so very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from G0dd0ll
Nice link with your title. I love the pic too! Your words are poignantly chosen and give to the imagery
Thank you for sharing this poem. I really like it.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
Nice link with your title. I love the pic too! Your words are poignantly chosen and give to the imagery
Thank you for sharing this poem. I really like it.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from mermaids
Congrats on winning the contest and your poem deserves it. Your lines and words are smooth and I like your last line "I can't extinguish". You did well with three lines, not any easy feat.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
Congrats on winning the contest and your poem deserves it. Your lines and words are smooth and I like your last line "I can't extinguish". You did well with three lines, not any easy feat.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Thank you so very much, I am thrilled, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Kym,
This is a wonderful piece of abstract art which illustrates your words of passion and love. Love can be all an encompassing fire the color of the picture.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Joan
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
Hi Kym,
This is a wonderful piece of abstract art which illustrates your words of passion and love. Love can be all an encompassing fire the color of the picture.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Thank you so very much, I am thrilled, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are most kindly welcome, Kym.
Joan
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Thank you so very much, I am totally thrilled, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Susanjohn
Love it! So much said in three little lines! What an outstanding image you were able to find! Perfectly fits your poem. Good luck to you in this contest :-)
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
Love it! So much said in three little lines! What an outstanding image you were able to find! Perfectly fits your poem. Good luck to you in this contest :-)
Comment Written 08-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This was pleasure to read. I thought it did a great job of taking a classic metaphor (love is a fire) and condensing it down to a more original way of saying it without extra words. Good luck in the contest.
This was pleasure to read. I thought it did a great job of taking a classic metaphor (love is a fire) and condensing it down to a more original way of saying it without extra words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
Comment from Ric Myworld
Since I don't know the first thing about poetry, I read very little. But whenever I'm about to post a story outside my comfort zone, I turn to reading poetry for inspiration. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
Since I don't know the first thing about poetry, I read very little. But whenever I'm about to post a story outside my comfort zone, I turn to reading poetry for inspiration. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, as always much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Kahpot, your poem is filled with good sensory appeal. I especially liked:
I can't extinguish
(That's a "bad" case of burning love)
Great photo choice. Well done. A pleasure to read. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
Hi Kahpot, your poem is filled with good sensory appeal. I especially liked:
I can't extinguish
(That's a "bad" case of burning love)
Great photo choice. Well done. A pleasure to read. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot