The Divine Nonsense of Jim Wile
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "True Love"A collection of 13 humorous poems
9 total reviews
Comment from Regina Elliott
Hello Jim, what a very
charming and humorous
rhyming poem about a
mischievous little boy. I loved
this cheerful Sunday morning
treat. All the best to you!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
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Hello Jim, what a very
charming and humorous
rhyming poem about a
mischievous little boy. I loved
this cheerful Sunday morning
treat. All the best to you!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much, Regina, and thank you for all those stars!
Comment from Kaiku
This is very funny. I didn`t have a 6 star left otherwise it would be in your pocket. Some how, I could see this poem being written by a technical writer/programmer. Hilarious.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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This is very funny. I didn`t have a 6 star left otherwise it would be in your pocket. Some how, I could see this poem being written by a technical writer/programmer. Hilarious.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you. Yeah, we programmers were a scrungy bunch!
Comment from Ginda Simpson
I like your little guy and his dog too. I think you just described my grandson. The poem flows well, moved forward with good rhyming and such a sense of fun (and underlying affection). Well done.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023
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I like your little guy and his dog too. I think you just described my grandson. The poem flows well, moved forward with good rhyming and such a sense of fun (and underlying affection). Well done.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much, Ginda! One of my grandsons is like this too. The other is Mr. Fastidious.
Comment from royowen
And then there's always my dog, he loves me. What a brilliantly written poem Jim, you are a constant blessing and surprise, you've done a wonderful job with this, post, such flow, hilariously funny, articulate and we rhymed, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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And then there's always my dog, he loves me. What a brilliantly written poem Jim, you are a constant blessing and surprise, you've done a wonderful job with this, post, such flow, hilariously funny, articulate and we rhymed, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Thanks so much, Roy. When I was a kid, my dog used to lick the boogers out of my nose. Maybe that's what inspired this poem!
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Heh heh love it
Comment from jmdg1954
Fantastic. I'm still laughing as I am responding/reviewing.
Every line had another issue Ruth his hygiene and they rhymed each and every time.
Excellent post, my friend!
John
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Fantastic. I'm still laughing as I am responding/reviewing.
Every line had another issue Ruth his hygiene and they rhymed each and every time.
Excellent post, my friend!
John
Comment Written 10-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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You're very kind. Thanks, John!
When I was a kid, my dog used to lick the boogers out of my nose. Perhaps that's where I got the idea for this poem!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
LOL As a mother who raised four boys who could care less about hygiene or clean rooms, I laughed out loud at this poem. I'm sorry and although a SLIGHT aggeration, it has a lot of truth to it
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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LOL As a mother who raised four boys who could care less about hygiene or clean rooms, I laughed out loud at this poem. I'm sorry and although a SLIGHT aggeration, it has a lot of truth to it
Comment Written 10-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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That's funny. My mother raised 3 boys, and if still alive would probably attest to about the same! Thanks for the good review, Barbara.
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was really a fun little poem. Dogs don't care at all, do they? We can be as gross or lazy as we want so long as we feed and pet them. Your rhyming poem was very cute. But, seriously, take a break and go shower. Gretchen
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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This was really a fun little poem. Dogs don't care at all, do they? We can be as gross or lazy as we want so long as we feed and pet them. Your rhyming poem was very cute. But, seriously, take a break and go shower. Gretchen
Comment Written 10-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Probably good advice! Thanks so much for the good review, Gretchen.
Comment from jessizero
Your poem reminded me of Shel Silverstein, and that's great! It was so funny, and the ending was so cute. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Your poem reminded me of Shel Silverstein, and that's great! It was so funny, and the ending was so cute. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for the great 6-star review, Jessi! It reminded me of Shel, too, when I wrote it. I loved his poems and his simple line drawings. Wish I could do that.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Man this is fantastic my created and witty, Jim!
I have the same type
Of ending with my Boldy Go Where No Man Has Gone piece except I used $&@%#. I think I like the way you covered the curse better.
This is great. It should be in a contest my friend, sure winner. Thanks for sharing.
Easy six!
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Man this is fantastic my created and witty, Jim!
I have the same type
Of ending with my Boldy Go Where No Man Has Gone piece except I used $&@%#. I think I like the way you covered the curse better.
This is great. It should be in a contest my friend, sure winner. Thanks for sharing.
Easy six!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for your great review and all those stars, Douglas. Much appreciated!
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Well deserved. You are a very good writer, my friend.