Daydreams from the Ashes
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Comment from jacquelyn popp
Really good job writing this. Good job with your descriptive words. This was a thought provoking and interesting read for me. I enjoyed reading your poem. I especially liked the lines in your poem the softest touch of breeze. I could almost feel a slight breeze across my lips. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Really good job writing this. Good job with your descriptive words. This was a thought provoking and interesting read for me. I enjoyed reading your poem. I especially liked the lines in your poem the softest touch of breeze. I could almost feel a slight breeze across my lips. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate your time and effort, and I hope it was worthwhile. I hope you have a wonderful day.
Comment from JT traveller
Thought provoking piece of writing. Just a comment, the font size and type was extremely hard to read.
Great last line. It really define the entire poem,
"...shape is better defined by what we hold dear."
A fine effort.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thought provoking piece of writing. Just a comment, the font size and type was extremely hard to read.
Great last line. It really define the entire poem,
"...shape is better defined by what we hold dear."
A fine effort.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing! Sorry about that. I meant to adjust the font to something more readable, not realizing the preview went away and it was actually published. That has been adjusted. I appreciate your time and effort. I hope you have a great day!