Heavenly Humor?
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fun write and I hope that never happens to me! I have a basement and always forget to take my phone when I go down there and one day I shall regret it! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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A fun write and I hope that never happens to me! I have a basement and always forget to take my phone when I go down there and one day I shall regret it! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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you know, there's sense in wearing one of those phone pouches around one's neck when at home alone, but who wants to do it?
thanks for reading.
Comment from Mia Twysted
This piece was so damaging. I felt so bad for the one who had fallen and there with no help in sight. Then to find yourself at the gates with more stairs to climb. I got a laugh.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2023
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This piece was so damaging. I felt so bad for the one who had fallen and there with no help in sight. Then to find yourself at the gates with more stairs to climb. I got a laugh.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2023
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good, it was meant to be a sadistic humor piece.
thanks for reading. and laughing.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 50 Word Story writing prompt contest. That was a roller-coaster...sad and funny ending.
The story grabbed my interest. The dialogue is believable. And the characters seem real. I would you recommend it.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2023
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Excellent entry for the 50 Word Story writing prompt contest. That was a roller-coaster...sad and funny ending.
The story grabbed my interest. The dialogue is believable. And the characters seem real. I would you recommend it.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 14-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2023
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thank you, ma'am! Much appreciated.
Comment from jessizero
I laughed at this. Is it really heaven if there are stairs??? I'm not old; I'm just fat.
Thank you so much for sharing this bit of humor, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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I laughed at this. Is it really heaven if there are stairs??? I'm not old; I'm just fat.
Thank you so much for sharing this bit of humor, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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thanks, Jessi, for reading and the good wishes.
I sure hope there aren't any!
Comment from w.j.debi
I got a laugh out of your humor. Yes, we never know when the time will come or what we can expect until we get there. The internal dialogue of the character works well. Love the ending. When you just broke your hip, stairs don't looks so fun.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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I got a laugh out of your humor. Yes, we never know when the time will come or what we can expect until we get there. The internal dialogue of the character works well. Love the ending. When you just broke your hip, stairs don't looks so fun.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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I'm glad you laughed. Thanks for reading and for your comments!
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, well I think the demographic of Fanstory will like this, for obvious reasons. I think the narration were thoughts and not spoken out loud until the ending. Nothing sacrilegious to me.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Hmm, well I think the demographic of Fanstory will like this, for obvious reasons. I think the narration were thoughts and not spoken out loud until the ending. Nothing sacrilegious to me.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Good. and thanks for the good wishes.
Comment from Olivanne Marsh
Even in heaven there are stairs and irony. Ha! However, it seems like anyone who gets beyond the pearly gates would be able to over come any heavenly challenge. Have no fear. Feel no pain. Be whole. Just saying. I am kidding you, I did not find this sadistic or sacrilegious and it did make me smile. The humor is in the irony, that no matter how big your challenge is, the next one is always bigger and you may not know it, but you can always overcome. It's hopeful humor in my opinion.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Even in heaven there are stairs and irony. Ha! However, it seems like anyone who gets beyond the pearly gates would be able to over come any heavenly challenge. Have no fear. Feel no pain. Be whole. Just saying. I am kidding you, I did not find this sadistic or sacrilegious and it did make me smile. The humor is in the irony, that no matter how big your challenge is, the next one is always bigger and you may not know it, but you can always overcome. It's hopeful humor in my opinion.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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ah! well, I might have to change it. thanks for reading and for your comments.