Dribbles And Drabbles
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Assault"A Collection Of Mini Stories
7 total reviews
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Brett,
this was pretty clever. Not at all what I expected. Well done. I've only been to a choirpractor once, and I didn't go for a headache. I think it was a free session which I wasn't too impressed with, so never returned. Thanks for sharing this.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Hello Brett,
this was pretty clever. Not at all what I expected. Well done. I've only been to a choirpractor once, and I didn't go for a headache. I think it was a free session which I wasn't too impressed with, so never returned. Thanks for sharing this.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I've become a big fan of flash fiction, getting to the point quickly. And thanks for sharing a great way to start my morning off with a laugh. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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I've become a big fan of flash fiction, getting to the point quickly. And thanks for sharing a great way to start my morning off with a laugh. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Always appreciate your insights and reviews.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I keep searching feeling I've missed this as a contest entry, but it doesn't seem to be. Anyway, you had me sit up and take notice as I read. Thank you for sharing.
Mrytle smiled, "Thanks to you, doctor." (period needed after 'smiled.')
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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I keep searching feeling I've missed this as a contest entry, but it doesn't seem to be. Anyway, you had me sit up and take notice as I read. Thank you for sharing.
Mrytle smiled, "Thanks to you, doctor." (period needed after 'smiled.')
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Not a contest entry. Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Sankey
Good one, mate. So glad to see you back in here. I better follow your example and get back to my own writing. I have plans just been occupied with other as explained before. The picture is great, too.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Good one, mate. So glad to see you back in here. I better follow your example and get back to my own writing. I have plans just been occupied with other as explained before. The picture is great, too.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review. When are you going to post again?
Comment from Ricky1024
Interesting book Brett.
This is kind of like murder turned into ecstasy.
I like it!.
Trick endings are always my favorite.
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Interesting book Brett.
This is kind of like murder turned into ecstasy.
I like it!.
Trick endings are always my favorite.
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Appreciate the review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
You got me. Lol. This was not was I was expecting. Great title, great buildup of tension. All in all this was a surprise ending that I never saw coming. Thank you for posting. Greatly enjoyed reading this. Gretchen
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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You got me. Lol. This was not was I was expecting. Great title, great buildup of tension. All in all this was a surprise ending that I never saw coming. Thank you for posting. Greatly enjoyed reading this. Gretchen
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Glad you enjoyed this Flash. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Ulla
That was short, Brett, I don't know what I expected but certainly not a flash fiction story with a surprise ending. And a surprise ending it certainly had. The more times I read it, the more I like it. Ulla:)))
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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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That was short, Brett, I don't know what I expected but certainly not a flash fiction story with a surprise ending. And a surprise ending it certainly had. The more times I read it, the more I like it. Ulla:)))
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Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.