Comment from Caitriona

Excellent

Well thought out and visually pleasing. Nice touch with the "coins" and taking another "nip". Really enjoyed this one and definitely a great time for it. Thanks for sharing and good luck!

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023

Thank you so much for the great review and comments. I was pleased that my poem won the contest.
Beth

Comment from jake cosmos aller

Excellent

what a St Patrick's night. Must have been a real wild party. Perhaps someone = a leprechaun spiked the green beer with LSD or something along those lines? well done imagining the consequence....

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023

Thank you Jake. I appreciate the great review and fun comments.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

That was an excellent read, a fun poem skilfully planned and constructed very thoughtfully. I enjoyed the light-hearted humour along with the mention of many things Irish. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023

Thank you Wendy. I'm so glad you like my poem. I had fun writing it.

Comment from Chrissy710

Exceptional

Hi Mystery writer
I enjoyed you poem which danced a jig down the page and had great rhythm and a fun sense of the Irish
Good luck it should do well
Cheers Christine

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023

Thank you Chrissy. I"m so glad you enjoyed this. It was fun to write. I delighted with the six stars.

Comment from Scott Dylan Thomas

Excellent

Very fun poem! Good use of a consistent rhyme scheme and meter, gave it a rolicky sort of feel, like beer swishing in a glass, side-to-side. Also enjoyed the sensory details. Good luck in the contest!

Happy St. Patrick's Day!

Scott

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023

Thank you Scott, I so glad you liked my poem. I enjoyed your comments.

Comment from BermyBye50

Excellent

This is a perfect for the entry Irish Themed contest. It is well written and accurately and creatively conveys the magic and wonder of the celebration of St Patrick's Day. Well done.

All the best in the contest,

Eugene

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023

Thank you Eugene. I really appreciate the great review and comments.

Comment from Kaiku

Excellent

very good and in high spirits, well, for the most part, until truth be told. Wearing of the green shall soon be upon us, a nip I might take but I`ll keep it light so as not to bring a troubled sight. Good luck in the writing prompt.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023

Thank you for an great review and poetic comments.

Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a good entry into the Irish Themed contest. Your text is a great size for reading. Your message is stated with clarity and is easy to understand. Your rhyme scheme is good. Your spacing of text in the poem box and overall presentation are well-done. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest. You have a possible winner.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023

Thank you Sandra. I'm so glad you liked this poem. Thanks for the good wishes.

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 15-Mar-2023

You are welcome. It's the best one I have read thus far.

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

Now that's some awesome green beer. The legendary journies we could take just by drinking beer. Sign me up! What a wonderfully written poem.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023

Thank you, Mike. I appreciate the review and comments.

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

I'll say this for the Irish, once they get in your head, you cannot get rid of them, with their lilts and kilts, (I'm told they have them), grand olde poets and green beer.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023

Thank you, Tom. They may have kilts because the Scots next door have them. I appreciate the review.