Side effects and symptoms
Why Can't You See It? contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
This seemingly meets the requirements of the challenge. Well done.
Everything chosen makes it easier to read. Font could be larger for ease of reading. This should score well.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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This seemingly meets the requirements of the challenge. Well done.
Everything chosen makes it easier to read. Font could be larger for ease of reading. This should score well.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Dear Tom, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Ricky1024
I've learned something about this disease as much as it. Someone who hears the voices and schizophrenic also is directed sometimes by them.
My youngest son Christopher was not only under control of it but it was also telling him to hurt himself in anybody around him.
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This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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I've learned something about this disease as much as it. Someone who hears the voices and schizophrenic also is directed sometimes by them.
My youngest son Christopher was not only under control of it but it was also telling him to hurt himself in anybody around him.
...
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Dear Ricky, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Sugarray77
This is very well written, Dove and you do a wonderful job in explaining the hidden trauma that this patient goes through as he walks this dark path. Let's hope that a cure for this condition comes soon.
Melissa
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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This is very well written, Dove and you do a wonderful job in explaining the hidden trauma that this patient goes through as he walks this dark path. Let's hope that a cure for this condition comes soon.
Melissa
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Hi Melissa, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from patcelaw
You have done a very good job of explaining in such a few words the symptoms of psychosis or mental illness. Having trouble that road myself, I know there are symptoms of the others do not see your or know about. Patricia.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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You have done a very good job of explaining in such a few words the symptoms of psychosis or mental illness. Having trouble that road myself, I know there are symptoms of the others do not see your or know about. Patricia.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Dear Patricia, thank you for your comments and review. Dove