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Life Happens

Being casual with life has consequences

16 total reviews 
Comment from Soledadpaz
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Oh, my goodness! What had he done? As they say, no good deed goes unpunished. Poor Parnell, now that he has all these dependents, what to do.

Great story!

Sol

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Ha ha ha, I bet he didn't expect that! You made me smile with this clever flash fiction, I wish you luck with the contest, a fun post full of humour, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023


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Comment from Alaskastory
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"Life Happens" is an amazing quick story that gives a true chuckle to any reader. You did quite a job of filling in a surprising amount of information in both words and the picture. Well done!

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2023


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Comment from mermaids
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Well, looks like Parnell has a few children to deal with. You have me laughing here. I guess men should think twice before donating sperm for money. Excellent little flash fiction tale with a strong point.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2023


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Comment from Mary Shifman
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Now that would be scary. I've often wondered about the possibility of having a lot of kids one knows nothing about. I understand why people use sperm donors but how can one make certain they aren't marrying their brother or sister? I think the concept has alarming possibilities. Cute story though.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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reply by Mary Shifman on 29-Mar-2023
    You are welcome.
Comment from Annmuma
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Great job. I wonder if the word 'donating' is correct? Maybe 'selling' his sperm? At any rate, a good write and an interesting thought. Good luck in the contest. ann

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
    Thanks Yes, true. I should change word.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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This short short fiction piece explains the true consequences of what happened when Parnell forgot to ask himself, "Which comes first, the sperm or the egg?" On the plus side, the children he fathered were family history/genealogy-oriented to come look him up. Good luck in that contest!

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2023


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Comment from Ben Colder
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Lol. Reminds me of when we had our sixth child, I told the wife we had screwed ourselves away from the table. Good entry. Hope you win. Best to you, Bro.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2023


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    Thanks Bro!
Comment from Shirley McLain
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A country mile, he had a lot of those little buggers. Great flash fiction, and you did an excellent job. I wish you luck in the Dribble Flash Fiction contest. Have a great evening. Shirley

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2023


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Comment from BethShelby
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This is funny. I guess he got through college selling sperm. I heard about the doctor who was using his own sperm rather than the that provided by those trying to have children. He had a tremendous amount of people with his DNA and they were finding by having the DNA done. I don't think any of them wanted to claim him as their father but did want to sue him.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2023


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