Thirty (hopefully) Poems for April
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Quite Out of the Blue"A loose attempt at NaPoWriMo 2023
8 total reviews
Comment from pome lover
cute poem, Debra.
please tell me WHERE did you find the link for this contest and the prompts. I didn't get in in the beginning either and I need some guidance. Helen has helped but because I didn't link my first poem with the contest, I'm just adding to my book from my last post.
many,many thanks!!!
Katharine
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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cute poem, Debra.
please tell me WHERE did you find the link for this contest and the prompts. I didn't get in in the beginning either and I need some guidance. Helen has helped but because I didn't link my first poem with the contest, I'm just adding to my book from my last post.
many,many thanks!!!
Katharine
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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Hi Katharine :)
Thank you for reading, I?ve sent you a message!
Best wishes, Deb x
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is so well rhymed and the melody carried this heavy elephant across the sky with ease of motion and your crazy thoughts here had some credence, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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This is so well rhymed and the melody carried this heavy elephant across the sky with ease of motion and your crazy thoughts here had some credence, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your kind feedback, Dolly :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Sally Law
Aw, Debta, this is precious, and so creative to use a book cover. I was just wondering where you were, possibly floating in fashionably late. I was right! Beautifully written and illustrated for your book of poetry.
Blessings,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Aw, Debta, this is precious, and so creative to use a book cover. I was just wondering where you were, possibly floating in fashionably late. I was right! Beautifully written and illustrated for your book of poetry.
Blessings,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Sal :)
I'll try to keep up lol!
Hope you're well.
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from shelley kaye
i remember seeing that book cover!
they had some cool ones, may go back and use some more for more poems lol
this poem fits the picture perfectly
and i love the last line! LOL!
nice rhyme and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley ð?¦?
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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i remember seeing that book cover!
they had some cool ones, may go back and use some more for more poems lol
this poem fits the picture perfectly
and i love the last line! LOL!
nice rhyme and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley ð?¦?
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Hi Shelley :)
Thank you for your kind feedback.
Some of the book covers shown were crazy - definitely inspiring!
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Gloria ....
Fun interpretation of the book cover. I might take a look at the prompts and see if I can use one or two.
A different take on pink elephants. I wonder if anyone has seen blue elephants after too many libations. Of course not.
Great job Debra, and good to see you. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Fun interpretation of the book cover. I might take a look at the prompts and see if I can use one or two.
A different take on pink elephants. I wonder if anyone has seen blue elephants after too many libations. Of course not.
Great job Debra, and good to see you. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Hi Gloria :)
Thank you so much for your feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good to see you, Debra, and I'm glad you are participating in NaPoWriMo.
-I like your artwork, presentation, and poem.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the fanciful nature of it, and the adventures of the elephant.
-Very good closing lines.
-Good luck with the project.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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-Good to see you, Debra, and I'm glad you are participating in NaPoWriMo.
-I like your artwork, presentation, and poem.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the fanciful nature of it, and the adventures of the elephant.
-Very good closing lines.
-Good luck with the project.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Hello Pam :)
Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful feedback. I'm happy you enjoyed the poem - it's nice to be writing again...hope to keep it up for a while!
Best wishes as always, Debra x
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You are very welcome, Debra, and I hope you do continue your writing!
Comment from lyenochka
Loved your whimsical poem which is perfect for a piece entitled "Out of the Blue". It was clearly not "pink elephants" so I'm sure you didn't have too much too drink! Lol.
Hope you are well celebrated on your birthday!!
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Loved your whimsical poem which is perfect for a piece entitled "Out of the Blue". It was clearly not "pink elephants" so I'm sure you didn't have too much too drink! Lol.
Hope you are well celebrated on your birthday!!
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Hello Helen :)
Thank you for your kind feedback and happy birthday wishes! It's a beautiful day here and school is on Easter break, so I foresee a happy and leisurely day!
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
You have presented us with a poem here with great rhymes, and a fun story. I think it would appeal to older children. Thank you very much for sharing. kay
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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You have presented us with a poem here with great rhymes, and a fun story. I think it would appeal to older children. Thank you very much for sharing. kay
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Kay :)
Best wishes, Debra x