Thirty (hopefully) Poems for April
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "No More No Less"A loose attempt at NaPoWriMo 2023
9 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
It's a very cute poem. We took need our coffee in the morning. It was humorous and flowed well. I've read similar porns to this, before, but you made this format personal and unique. Good work! :))
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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It's a very cute poem. We took need our coffee in the morning. It was humorous and flowed well. I've read similar porns to this, before, but you made this format personal and unique. Good work! :))
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for your feedback :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Gloria ....
I think you have done a fantastic job of this one, Debra. It is interesting when we have precise numbers of things we have for the perfect brew.
Pristine metre and rhyme and a fine addition to you book. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
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I think you have done a fantastic job of this one, Debra. It is interesting when we have precise numbers of things we have for the perfect brew.
Pristine metre and rhyme and a fine addition to you book. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Gloria, for your lovely feedback and generous star rating. I appreciate both very much and I?m glad you enjoyed my poem :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Sally Law
Debra, you are so clever. I never knew this about Beethoven and his coffee. I wonder how he came to the 60. Amazing man and highly gifted. Maybe he found the secret concoction.
Beautifully penned and illustrated, my friend.
Blessings for your book of poems!
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Debra, you are so clever. I never knew this about Beethoven and his coffee. I wonder how he came to the 60. Amazing man and highly gifted. Maybe he found the secret concoction.
Beautifully penned and illustrated, my friend.
Blessings for your book of poems!
Sal XOs
Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Hi Sal, I didn?t know about Beethovem?s Coffee quirk, either!
Thank you so much for your feedback :)
Best wishes, Debra x
Comment from lyenochka
Hmm. Methinks Herr Beethoven had Asperger's of some degree. I'm quite sure he couldn't detect the difference between 61 or 59 coffee beans! Lol. Great little factoid!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Hmm. Methinks Herr Beethoven had Asperger's of some degree. I'm quite sure he couldn't detect the difference between 61 or 59 coffee beans! Lol. Great little factoid!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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LOL
Thank you so much for your feedback, Helen :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from jessizero
I loved your rhymes and the concept behind the poem. You did an excellent job writing a poem about Beethoven and his coffee. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you. Good luck with your month of poems!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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I loved your rhymes and the concept behind the poem. You did an excellent job writing a poem about Beethoven and his coffee. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you. Good luck with your month of poems!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Jessi, for your feedback and good luck wishes :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great artwork and nice presentation, Debra.
-I used mental floss for some of the history of women, but
I didn't know they had a fact generator. I will have to try that.
-You wrote a good poem and it made me chuckle.
-I could picture him saying some of those things.
-I think it's because you have that proper English tone throughout the poem.
-I like your line about the muck and how he hasn't lost his taste.
-A good concluding verse, too.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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-Great artwork and nice presentation, Debra.
-I used mental floss for some of the history of women, but
I didn't know they had a fact generator. I will have to try that.
-You wrote a good poem and it made me chuckle.
-I could picture him saying some of those things.
-I think it's because you have that proper English tone throughout the poem.
-I like your line about the muck and how he hasn't lost his taste.
-A good concluding verse, too.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for your feedback, Pam :)
I?m glad you enjoyed my poem. I?ll definitely use the fact generator again when I?m stuck for inspiration!
Best wishes as always, Debra x
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You are very welcome, Debra. I tried it, and I didn't come up anything very interesting😊
Comment from RodG
I like your interesting fact about Beethoven. I wonder how many coffee drinkers today areas persnickety about the number of beans as he was. He would have snubbed me because I like that "instant muck." Rod
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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I like your interesting fact about Beethoven. I wonder how many coffee drinkers today areas persnickety about the number of beans as he was. He would have snubbed me because I like that "instant muck." Rod
Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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I like the instant muck too!
Thank you so much for your feedback :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, No More No Less, presented with three ABCB-rhymed quatrains, presents a directive that seems both demanding on one side and "measured" on the other.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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This poem, No More No Less, presented with three ABCB-rhymed quatrains, presents a directive that seems both demanding on one side and "measured" on the other.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for your feedback :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I adore this little write with loads of oomph! Your metre is perfect and your well chosen rhymes add to the spark as your coffee is full of strong flavour here, a magical write from a talented pen Debra, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023
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I adore this little write with loads of oomph! Your metre is perfect and your well chosen rhymes add to the spark as your coffee is full of strong flavour here, a magical write from a talented pen Debra, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023
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Hi Dolly :)
thank you so much for your very kind feedback. It means a lot :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x