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Thirty (hopefully) Poems for April

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A loose attempt at NaPoWriMo 2023

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Comment from Father Flaps
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Hi Debra,
I don't even have much for eyebrows, let alone a glabella. Never heard of the word before, but it rhymes so nicely with "crapella", another word that isn't in my dictionary. I love both words! And your limerick was purr-fect! Keep going with the NaPoWriMo! Yer doin good!
Hugs,
Kimbob

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
    Thanks so much, Kimbob :) x
Comment from lyenochka
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Loved your fun limerick of this situation. People would make weird assumptions about the personality or character of those with a "unibrow" where the glabella was unseen because of the brows being connected with hair. It's good that Stella didn't care!

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
    Hi Helen :)
    Thank you for your feedback.
    Glad you enjoyed the read!
    Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Cherish Adams
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I love entries like this one. It's funny and a delight to read. Thank you for educating me. Thank you for your NaPoWriMo entry and good luck with the rest of the month.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
    Thank you so much, Cherish, for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate it :)
    Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Kerry Foley
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Hello there, my friend and happy Easter.

Well done!

This is a terrific poem you've penned.

Good luck!





---Kerry.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
    Thank you so much for your feedback, Kerry :)
    Best wishes, Debra
reply by Kerry Foley on 17-Apr-2023
    You're welcome. You too.
Comment from Heather Knight
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I have to learn to do that. To accept myself, I mean.
The notes are very helpful. I had heard glabella, but never crapella (extremely funny word).
Your poem is hilarious.
Thanks for making me laugh. x

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
    Hi Maria, Thank you again for your kind feedback and generous star rating :)
    Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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My Granddaughter is called Stella and she cares very much about her hair. I love the Limerick first stanza here Debra, perfectly formed and I enjoyed the wise words in the second stanza, an amusing and entertaining read, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
    Hi Dolly,
    Thank you so much for your feedback :)
    Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Good artwork and presentation, Debra.
-I am getting a good education from your notes!
-You wrote a good poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-A very good opening verse introducing Stella.
-A very good message in the second verse.
-Thanks for sharing it.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
    Hi Pam,
    Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback :)
    Best wishes as always, Debra x
reply by Pam (respa) on 10-Apr-2023
    You are very welcome, Debra.
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
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Good thing she lives in modern time. Back in the day, a unibrow would have got her accused of being a werewolf. That was a fun poem. I enjoyed reading it. Hope you have a happy Easter.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
    Happy Easter!
    Thank you so much for your feedback :)
    Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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I love limericks and this one didn't disappoint. Funny and clever (had never heard of 'glabella' but am now duly informed and thought 'crapella' was made up and, if so, still impressed) The message is pertinent in this age of vanity and narcissism and the whole post well rhymed and an enjoyable read. Many thanks for sharing, Debbie

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
    Thank you so much for your feedback, Debbie :)
    Glad you enjoyed reading my poem.
    Best wishes, Debra
Comment from JT traveller
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Stella must have had a very long fringe! I like the inclusion of the word capella, it lends itself well to the light-humoured nature of the Limerick.

The quatern is equally well composed.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
    Thank you so much for your feedback :)
    Best wishes, Debra