Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This novenary reel, How I Did Yell, has the proper formatting and reminds the rest of us to watch our step or we might find some poetic inspiration after plopping on our keisters as well.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023

LOL! Cheers Bill, best wishes as always, Debra

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

I really like this even if it's not truly a novenary reel.
Even though the situation isn't funny, you make it sound humorous as usual.
I do hope you are okay.
Hugs,
MJ

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023

Hi Maria,
Thank you for reading and for the kind feedback.
I?m a little sore, but I?ll get over it! Thanks :)
Love Debra x

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You made me smile here Debra with this fine Novenary Reel full of movement as you fall on your bottom! Oh dear, I bet that did hurt. Very inventive with a perfect syllable count, and a joy to read, this is a lot of fun and thank you for giving this one a whirl! Love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, Dolly :)
Glad you enjoyed my take on your fun form... apologies for missing out half of the requirements!
Best wishes as always, Debra x

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

Ouch! go and buy an inflatable swimming ring to sit on. A bruised / cracked coccyx is an extremely painful affair. I much enjoyed your Novenny Reel, you told a horrible story with great humour. kay

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023

Thanks so much, Kay, for your feedback and for the self-care advice! Much appreciated :)
Best wishes as always, Debra

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Dolly will be so thrilled that another poet has used her form! It is a fun style and you made it even more fun describing a humorous situation and I hope it's not biographical!

and curse, aswell - (as well)

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023

Hi Helen,
Thanks for your helpful feedback - typo now fixed :)
Unfortunately it is biographical - I?m a little sore this morning and am sporting quite a colourful bruise...
Best wishes as always, Debra x

reply by lyenochka on 16-Apr-2023

That's when arnica comes in handy for me. But as long as you're not allergic to the daisy family of plants...

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Wonderful! Very amusing and a lovely modified novenary reel ( I hate following rules too!) I think it suits this verse form admirably and its very modern style is a winner for me! Your character also shines through! Well done, Debbie

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023

Hi Debbie,
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. I?m really happy you enjoyed the read and don?t mind the rules being bent slightly!
Best wishes as always, Debra :)

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Even though you messed up, your poem is still a very good poem. I did enjoyed reading it. I I noticed there was nothing do hope right now todayyou didn't hurt yourself too badly. God bless and have a good day. Patricia.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023

Thank you for your kind feedback, Patricia :)
Best wishes, Debra

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I have fallen and hurt my coccyx, it really hurts, a very funny pain though, quite different. Well done with this poem, an excellent post, I hope you recovered, funny for others, not for you, well dine, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, Roy :)
Best wishes as always, Debra

reply by royowen on 16-Apr-2023

A pleasure