Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

I still remember this dread when I was young and in school. My single mother was very good and hard working, and traveled on public transportation. We had to be in bed early to be up long before sunrise. Her bus left at 7am. My life as a mother was a dream compared to hers. Monday was always the hardest day though. Still is for some reason. Maybe it's cell memory. LOL!
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the book.
Sal xoxo

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, Sal :) x

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

When I was working I used to detest Mondays and returning to work as I just loved my leisure time so much and now that I am retired I put far more pressure on myself to work at home than I did when I was working! Ha ha ha! I enjoyed the sentiment here, your clever rhymes and flow, a joy to read Debra, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, Dolly :) x

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Monday comes around very quickly. Also, the years pass by more quickly as we get older. I wish you the very best in all of your writing. Have a good day and God bless. Patricia.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023

Thank you, Patricia :)

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I remember those times! I think I'd always get a little stressed Sunday night and couldn't sleep well anticipating all that awaited me on Monday mornings. Great meter and rhymes to describe the ever fleeting weekends and the always looming Mondays in your well written quatern poem!

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023

Thanks so much, Helen :) x

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

The artwork had laughing straight out and it is a perfect choice for a finely rhymed and metred quatern showing just how bad Monday is for rolling around so quickly all the time.

Another fine addition to your NaPo book.

Gloria

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, Gloria :) x

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Lovely, light relatable verse with that cascading line (I've learnt about). Perfectly metered, smooth rhythm and unforced rhyme, this message is really wishing Monday would simply go away for a bit longer. A lot of consensus there! At least you'll know it's inspired you to write an excellent poem. Have a good day tomorrow! Debbie

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023

Thanks so much, Debbie :) x

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

how about "not got" to: The weekend's barely off the ground.?
just a thought ;)


anwyay, this was a great quatern with an excellent repeating line everyone can relate to!

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023

Thank you, Shelley :)

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I don't think there's too many young'uns on fanstory at the moment, so I think they will be many that can relate to your fabulously written Quatern, you are to be commended for this, smooth, articulate and well written poem, well done Debra, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, Roy :)

reply by royowen on 18-Apr-2023

Most welcome

Comment from jessizero

Exceptional

I absolutely loved this poem. Your story was funny, and I loved your rhymes. Time does seem to fly by when you don't want it to. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, Jessi :) I appreciate your kind feedback and generous star rating x