Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This rictameter, Sun and Moon, has the proper formatting and gives the readers a positive and charming look at your twins. So many twin stories to know and for which to prepare. Neat.

 Comment Written 02-May-2023

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reply by the author on 02-May-2023

Thanks for your feedback, Bill :)
The girls do look like twins, although there's 3 years between them!
Best wishes, Debra

Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Hi Debra well done and it is interesting how sisters can be wuite different yet very close at the sane time
I have. Katie also my only daughter who is so much fun and a bit nutty like me lol
Your girls look lovely
Cheers Chris

 Comment Written 01-May-2023

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reply by the author on 01-May-2023

Ah, thanks so much, Chris :) How old is your Katie? Mine is 15 and has her nutty moments too!
Best wishes, Debra x

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

And don't they look like you! A charming, flowing verse, lovingly expressed with those three middle lines, a lovely centrepiece of well crafted imagery. I enjoyed the shape of this verse and the way in which each line is a little gem in itself. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Debbie

 Comment Written 01-May-2023

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reply by the author on 01-May-2023

Hi Debbie :) Thank you for your lovely feedback. Yes, there's no denying that I'm their mum! My son looks even more so like me than the girls, although he is tall and built like his dad.
Best wishes as always, Debra :)

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

What a nice poem about your daughters. You make a good analogy and use very descriptive and caring words. Your love for each of your daughters shines through every word. Good writing! And God bless them!

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 01-May-2023

Thank you so much for your kind feedback.
Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Aw, so beautiful and although they are similar, so different. They didn't fall far from you, Debra. I see your likeness in both of your daughters. I didn't have any girls, but my granddaughter, Sophia, is my mirror image.

I enjoyed this in the rictameter form. I have actually done a few of these.

Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 01-May-2023

Ah, thank you so much, dear Sal :)
Glad you enjoyed my poem.
Best wishes as always, Debra x

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fine tribute to your wonderful daughters here Debra. And just like mine, they are very different in personality and compliment each other, fine words.

Just a small suggestion for this line:

(yet, both shine (so) beautifully to me).

Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023

Hello Dolly :)
Thank you for your kind feedback and the suggestion. I took the suggestion - I already used 'as' twice in the line above, so 'so' was the perfect alternative :) thanks again!
Best wishes as always, Debra x

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

They are lovely and yes, they look like their personalities are as different as the sun and moon! So beautiful and so different. You are indeed blessed! My daughters are that different, too!

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, Helen, for your feedback and also the generous pump! Best wishes as always, Debra :) x

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

Oppositions in our children can be as interesting and satisfying as their similarities. I have two strong girls and two gentle boys. It's like watching a mixed doubles tennis game. kay

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023

Thank you for your feedback, Kay :)
As well as the girls, we also have a son who is as different again! You're right, their differences are interesting and satisfying to see.
Best wishes as always, Debra x

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice photo and presentation, Debra.
-A well written poem with good
examples of your daughters' characteristics.
-I like the sun and moon comparison.
-You have very good concluding lines
about how they balance each other and
add great joy to your family.
-How far apart in age are they?

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023

Hello Pam, thank you for your kind and thoughtful feedback :)
Katie is 15 and Rebecca is 12. We also have a son, Ben, who is almost 18!
Best wishes as always, Debra x

reply by Pam (respa) on 30-Apr-2023

You are very welcome, Debra, and thanks for sharing. I can see you have a lot on your plate!

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a lovely poem about daughters. Your daughters are beautiful young ladies, and I know you are very proud of them. I myself have three beautiful daughters. They are all as different as the Camby 21 is like the sun. Another is like the moon and another is like the Earth itself. Have a blessed day and God bless you. Patricia.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, Patricia, for your kind feedback and for sharing about your daughters. As well as our girls, we also have a son, Ben, who is the eldest of the three :)
Best wishes as always, Debra