Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

I love monoku poetry. It has become one of my favorites this year. A stunning offering in one line haiku, Debra dear.

Sending you my best today as always and best for the challenge.
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 11-May-2023

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reply by the author on 11-May-2023

Hi Sal :)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. I enjoyed writing this one - I've never written a one line haiku before!
Best wishes as always, Debra :) x

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I love that about the brilliantly colored tulips. They can really cheer up a gray day and we have lots of rain here so it's often overcast but the tulip fields are brilliant. Nice one-line haiku!

 Comment Written 08-May-2023

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reply by the author on 08-May-2023

Thanks so much, Helen :) I love tulips, they are so cheery. We've had loads in our garden but the heavy rain this week has battered them.
Best wishes as always, Debra x

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

They are everywhere just now and their delightful colour brings magic to every garden and I enjoyed your Haiku for the club Debra, uplifting and full of magical colour, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-May-2023

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reply by the author on 08-May-2023

Thanks so much, Dolly :) I love tulips, they are so cheery. We've had loads in our garden but the heavy rain this week has battered them.
Best wishes as always, Debra x

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, Debra,
thank you for participating in the one-line haiku club event. Great entry with a good syllable count. Beautiful presentation and imagery.

Good job,

gypsy hugs
"learn the rules like a pro, so you can break them like an artist". - Picasso

 Comment Written 07-May-2023

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reply by the author on 08-May-2023

Thank you so much, Gypsy :)
Best wishes as always, Debra

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. The sentences flow with clarity. It's beautifully written. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 07-May-2023

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reply by the author on 08-May-2023

Thank you so much for your feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and presentation, Debra.
-You did a good job with the one line haiku.
-Effective color and nature imagery.
-You create a good word picture of the tulips
and "defying the grey" is a good "aha" moment.
-Well done and one more to go!!! YAY!!!

 Comment Written 07-May-2023

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reply by the author on 08-May-2023

Hi Pam :)
Thank you for your lovely feedback and encouragement! I always appreciate your thoughtful reviews.
Best wishes, Debra x

reply by Pam (respa) on 08-May-2023

You are very welcome, Debra.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Flowers are the symbol of so many things, and although I'm not sure of what the tulip is precisely, it's a much prized, and fondly admired flower, there is a marvellous tulip festival in Ottawa in Canada we attended a few years, viva the tulip, well done Dbra, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 07-May-2023

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reply by the author on 08-May-2023

Thank you so much for your feedback, Roy. Best wishes, Debra :)

reply by royowen on 08-May-2023

A pleasure

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Lovely one-liner, Debra! You do it so well, perfectly illustrating in such few words the image before you. It's a real little 'poem in your pocket' that you could take out on an overcast day to cheer yourself up! Thanks for sharing. Debbie

 Comment Written 07-May-2023

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reply by the author on 08-May-2023

Glad you enjoyed this one Debbie :) We had loads of various coloured tulips in the garden but the heavy rain has battered them and they're a bit tatty looking now... Enjoy your week :)
Best wishes, Debra x