Thirty (hopefully) Poems for April
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Closing The Book"A loose attempt at NaPoWriMo 2023
10 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Hooray!! Thank you for finishing and it doesn't matter! We both knew you were incredibly busy juggling work, mothering and helping your husband while posting a poem a day!
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Hooray!! Thank you for finishing and it doesn't matter! We both knew you were incredibly busy juggling work, mothering and helping your husband while posting a poem a day!
Comment Written 10-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Helen.
I've appreciated your support throughout the challenge and I thank you for encouraging me to join in :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Congratulations, Debra, on the completion of your
book. I know you worked hard on it and were determined
to finish. I liked the image and rhyme scheme of this plus
the fun message.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Congratulations, Debra, on the completion of your
book. I know you worked hard on it and were determined
to finish. I liked the image and rhyme scheme of this plus
the fun message.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Hi Jan :)
Thank you for your lovely feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Congratulations! Writing daily poems is not easy. I know, I write 2 a day, every day. But the more you practice the easier they come.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Congratulations! Writing daily poems is not easy. I know, I write 2 a day, every day. But the more you practice the easier they come.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Hi Gypsy :) Thank you for your feedback.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Well done for completing the challenge Debra and you shared some wonderful poetry with us and you can take a well earned rest now. A fine poem to finish your journey with here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Well done for completing the challenge Debra and you shared some wonderful poetry with us and you can take a well earned rest now. A fine poem to finish your journey with here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Hi Dolly :)
Thank you for your lovely feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from patcelaw
I admire your perseverance and staying with the April contest. Many people would've just given up when they got behind a couple of days. But use labored on and got through the full 30 days. Patricia.
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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I admire your perseverance and staying with the April contest. Many people would've just given up when they got behind a couple of days. But use labored on and got through the full 30 days. Patricia.
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Thank you for your kind feedback, Patricia :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from BermyBye50
Debra,
This is a excellent write recalling this past month's NaPoWriMo's contest. I missed entering the initial contest on April first, but managed to write 20 poems for my first book in the second contest before the deadline. The challenge to write on the fly and create something new each day was inspiring and most satisfying. I now have the confidence needed to proceed with creating a number of books here on Fanstory in preparation for future publishing.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Debra,
This is a excellent write recalling this past month's NaPoWriMo's contest. I missed entering the initial contest on April first, but managed to write 20 poems for my first book in the second contest before the deadline. The challenge to write on the fly and create something new each day was inspiring and most satisfying. I now have the confidence needed to proceed with creating a number of books here on Fanstory in preparation for future publishing.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Hi Eugene :)
Thank you for your lovely feedback and good luck with your writing. I look forward to reading you :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Congratulations Debra! I think that's an amazing achievement! Lovely, smooth flowing rhyming verse to complete the job, testament to stamina! Maybe mow a 10k (only joking)? Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Congratulations Debra! I think that's an amazing achievement! Lovely, smooth flowing rhyming verse to complete the job, testament to stamina! Maybe mow a 10k (only joking)? Take care Debbie
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Ah, thank you so much, Debbie, for your lovely feedback and for sticking with me throughout the challenge!
I did actually go for a run this morning - another 5k, a different route, but in exactly the same time as last time! 10k is beyond my reach at the moment, but I'll get there... I know I've got it in me! LOL Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, Debra.
-Congratulations on making it and not giving up!
-Your "chapters are complete" and you
definitely can "close this book with pride."
-Well done!
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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-Nice image and presentation, Debra.
-Congratulations on making it and not giving up!
-Your "chapters are complete" and you
definitely can "close this book with pride."
-Well done!
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Hi Pam :)
Thank you for your lovely feedback and encouragement throughout the challenge.
Best wishes as always, Debra x
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You are very welcome, Debra. I enjoyed your poems!
Comment from royowen
And you're still going on, you've done your self proud Debra, your girls and your hubby. But most of all you've fulfilled a dream that you've held to, so well done My friend, take a bow, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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And you're still going on, you've done your self proud Debra, your girls and your hubby. But most of all you've fulfilled a dream that you've held to, so well done My friend, take a bow, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Hello Roy :)
Thank you for your kind feedback and encouragement. I appreciate it. Do you have any suggestions for improvement that would increase the star rating?
Best wishes as always, Debra
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Most welcome
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Debra,
This is a good ending poem for such a hard task to do. Writing a poem a day is hard because life has other things that need to be done that may be more important.
Congrats for finishing.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Hi Debra,
This is a good ending poem for such a hard task to do. Writing a poem a day is hard because life has other things that need to be done that may be more important.
Congrats for finishing.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Hi Joan :)
Thank you for your lovely feedback.
Best wishes, Debra x
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My pleasure, Debra.
Joan