Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Your poem is truly uplifting, and my secret as well of beating the blues. I find looking at my blessings, helping others, and not focusing on my own pain, things seem to work themselves out. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-May-2023

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reply by the author on 14-May-2023

Ah... a kindred spirit to beating the blues! You and I are sensible people. Your strategies are the right ones.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Excellent words of advice, and it was thoughtful to acknowledge that it might take time (a prayer ... some time ahead, if not today). Your whole poem is meaningful , thoughtfully written, and very encouraging. Best wishes in the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 14-May-2023

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reply by the author on 14-May-2023

Thanks very much for this lovely review, Wendy.

reply by Wendy G on 14-May-2023

Congratulations on your win. It was certainly the best, and you had my vote. Well done.
Wendy

reply by the author on 14-May-2023

Thank you so much!

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Enjoyed reading your poem.
God's nature is displayed within your poem.
We should feel blessed for each seed that grows.
If we talk to God it might make things clear.

 Comment Written 13-May-2023

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reply by the author on 14-May-2023

Thanks for taking the time to review my poem. Nature and God are sources of solace.

Comment from Mario PIERRE

Excellent

This is a really uplifting and moral-boosting poem. I like the purity it describes, from the grandeur of nature to the theme on God. Well done!! Good luck!!

 Comment Written 13-May-2023

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reply by the author on 16-May-2023

Thanks for this lovely review!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Beneath the dormant snow is hope of life and I enjoyed the sentiment here as your poem is indeed uplifting and positive, seasons are always truly blessed with hope as they fulfil their destiny, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-May-2023

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reply by the author on 16-May-2023

Thanks for your lovely response to this poem, Dolly.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

This is a really comforting poem and I like the emphasis of looking up and viewing the beauty all around and talking with God. Hope this does well in the contest!

 Comment Written 13-May-2023

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reply by the author on 16-May-2023

Thanks very much for your comments... talking with God helped me write it.... therefore it turned out well!

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

A lovely smooth-flowing verse with good rhyme and uplifting sentiments in-keeping with the brief of this contest. The whole message is a very positive one inspired by faith. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 13-May-2023

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

You have won a winning verse and I wish I had six stars to give you. Your rhyming is flawless and the message of your words is clear, inviting the reader to consider this path to peace. In nature, we can hear God's voice.

 Comment Written 13-May-2023

Comment from zanya

Excellent

This poem is certainly uplifting and reminds us readers that life is about more than consumerism and secularism -'A talk with God might make things clear'

 Comment Written 13-May-2023

Comment from Mimi Linny

Excellent

This is a very lovely piece of uplifting poetry, inspiring the reader to be soothed through talk and meditation. Rhyme and rhythm work nicely through this piece and the artwork chosen is calming and very complimentary. Nicely done!

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 Comment Written 13-May-2023