Guided by Faith
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Comment from w.j.debi
I'm glad they got through the awkwardness of the next morning and Seth and Emma are back on track. I like Seth wanting to comfort Emma by putting his hand on her back but hesitating so that it would not be too familiar. It takes time to build that trust and comfort with each other. It takes a moment to step back and realize they have only known each other a couple of weeks now.
The dialog and actions are so realistic. I look forward to more.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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I'm glad they got through the awkwardness of the next morning and Seth and Emma are back on track. I like Seth wanting to comfort Emma by putting his hand on her back but hesitating so that it would not be too familiar. It takes time to build that trust and comfort with each other. It takes a moment to step back and realize they have only known each other a couple of weeks now.
The dialog and actions are so realistic. I look forward to more.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Barbara!
This is a well written chapter in your book. It is flawless and interesting.
In it, we can feel the emotions of all characters involved. The hesitant way Emma reaches out to Seth is evident, as well as his compassionate response to her.
You are a brilliant writer and should never doubt yourself. Reviewers can often be over critical, I know how that goes, but the ones who mean well are evident and consistent.
Keep on writing. I love it!
Rhonda
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023
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Hi Barbara!
This is a well written chapter in your book. It is flawless and interesting.
In it, we can feel the emotions of all characters involved. The hesitant way Emma reaches out to Seth is evident, as well as his compassionate response to her.
You are a brilliant writer and should never doubt yourself. Reviewers can often be over critical, I know how that goes, but the ones who mean well are evident and consistent.
Keep on writing. I love it!
Rhonda
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023
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Thank you for this encouraging review. I needed this.
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My pleasure. I always enjoy your work!
Comment from BermyBye50
Barbara,
You've penned another brilliant chapter in the book Guided by Faith. These will be an exceptional addition to your published works. Your mastery of dialogue is inviting and draws the reader into the lives of the characters you have created in this well written novel. Your skill and talent is well presented in your ability to paint with words a portrait full of exquisite imagery and majesty in your word choices. I'm very impressed with your skill and your creativity in each of your writes.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023
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Barbara,
You've penned another brilliant chapter in the book Guided by Faith. These will be an exceptional addition to your published works. Your mastery of dialogue is inviting and draws the reader into the lives of the characters you have created in this well written novel. Your skill and talent is well presented in your ability to paint with words a portrait full of exquisite imagery and majesty in your word choices. I'm very impressed with your skill and your creativity in each of your writes.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 07-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm sure we all have wished many times we had had someone we could call in the middle of the night. But sadly, few of us have anyone to turn to or talk to when we need them most. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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I'm sure we all have wished many times we had had someone we could call in the middle of the night. But sadly, few of us have anyone to turn to or talk to when we need them most. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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That is true. We often do need that person. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
She is still tramatized my the attempted robbery. I don't blame her. She seems even more embarassed because she called Seth in the middle of the night. It sounds like they have that behind them and are acting normal again. I look forward to more.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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She is still tramatized my the attempted robbery. I don't blame her. She seems even more embarassed because she called Seth in the middle of the night. It sounds like they have that behind them and are acting normal again. I look forward to more.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Another great chapter! I really liked and laughed at this line:
"It'd make me feel important."
You are nailing the ackward tension between the two perfectly. Good job!
D
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Another great chapter! I really liked and laughed at this line:
"It'd make me feel important."
You are nailing the ackward tension between the two perfectly. Good job!
D
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the support. I appreciate it.
Comment from lyenochka
I'm glad that Seth knew how to gently break the awkwardness in Emma's avoiding him. Sounds like they understand each other better with each chapter.
It's good Seth asks for advice.
One place I wasn't sure who was talking was here:
"It'd make me feel important."
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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I'm glad that Seth knew how to gently break the awkwardness in Emma's avoiding him. Sounds like they understand each other better with each chapter.
It's good Seth asks for advice.
One place I wasn't sure who was talking was here:
"It'd make me feel important."
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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I'll check that area. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Teri7
Barbara, This is another great chapter you have penned. I like how Seth and Emma are gradually getting to know each other a little bit at a time. The dogs play a big part in this too. I can't wait for the next chapter! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Barbara, This is another great chapter you have penned. I like how Seth and Emma are gradually getting to know each other a little bit at a time. The dogs play a big part in this too. I can't wait for the next chapter! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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You are so welcome!
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Excellent story and congratulations on being RECOGNIZED and being #2 in June for ALL TIME BEST!
I enjoyed reading and this piece held my attention throughout!
Thank you for sharing and many blessings to you and your family!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Excellent story and congratulations on being RECOGNIZED and being #2 in June for ALL TIME BEST!
I enjoyed reading and this piece held my attention throughout!
Thank you for sharing and many blessings to you and your family!
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the well wished and kind review.
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;-)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I was surprised by Emma's reaction to Seth the following day. I know she's shy and innocent, but she called for his help, and he gave it in the most gentlemanly way. Between both of their hang-ups, it will be amazing if they actually get a romance off the ground. Lol.
I liked the way you had Keith ask Emma to give Seth the statement, at least they got over that barrier. Your writing is very descriptive and allows us to creep in and be a part of what's going on. I like that. Well done, Barbara. Another excellent chapter. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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I was surprised by Emma's reaction to Seth the following day. I know she's shy and innocent, but she called for his help, and he gave it in the most gentlemanly way. Between both of their hang-ups, it will be amazing if they actually get a romance off the ground. Lol.
I liked the way you had Keith ask Emma to give Seth the statement, at least they got over that barrier. Your writing is very descriptive and allows us to creep in and be a part of what's going on. I like that. Well done, Barbara. Another excellent chapter. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. They both have a few issues to work out. LOL