Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 173 " ~ Tangled up in You ~"Romantic Tanka Poems
15 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sensual and erotic poem and this close connection here is full of passion and physical arousal as these words evoke a sexual connotation, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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This is a sensual and erotic poem and this close connection here is full of passion and physical arousal as these words evoke a sexual connotation, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Lisasview
Love the image you chose... Images often can tel the whole story and yours really complements your Tanka poem.......
Lisa, new to this site.................
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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Love the image you chose... Images often can tel the whole story and yours really complements your Tanka poem.......
Lisa, new to this site.................
Comment Written 15-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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Welcome to fanstory, it's a wonderful community to learn and like minded friends. Let me know if I can help.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very beautiful tanka poem. Enjoyed it very much. I hope you have a wonderful day. I wish you the very best result of your writing. My God bless you. Patricia
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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This is a very beautiful tanka poem. Enjoyed it very much. I hope you have a wonderful day. I wish you the very best result of your writing. My God bless you. Patricia
Comment Written 15-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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Thank you, Patricia, I appreciate your kind review. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
This was a wonderful tanka, Gypsy. The dual pictures was fantastic because they showed the love that exist. Your words of the tanka were blended in a fantastic way. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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This was a wonderful tanka, Gypsy. The dual pictures was fantastic because they showed the love that exist. Your words of the tanka were blended in a fantastic way. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.
Gypsy hug
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from royowen
I just love the photo my friend, the words just float into place with this superb example of ekphrastic interpretation dear friend, what a good work, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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I just love the photo my friend, the words just float into place with this superb example of ekphrastic interpretation dear friend, what a good work, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Most welcome
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Once again, innocently seductive. The passion could be felt. I enjoyed reading. Touch your laugh, breathe in your sandalwood scent, and your midnight eyes are all great descriptions. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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Once again, innocently seductive. The passion could be felt. I enjoyed reading. Touch your laugh, breathe in your sandalwood scent, and your midnight eyes are all great descriptions. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from shelley kaye
had to google 'sandlewood' - never heard of that before lol
love that first line about touching laughter - very cool imagery
a great tanka and pics!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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had to google 'sandlewood' - never heard of that before lol
love that first line about touching laughter - very cool imagery
a great tanka and pics!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 14-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hug
Comment from JSD
Ooh this is beautiful, from the moment you mix the senses of 'touch' and 'laugh', through the whispered sibilance of 'sandalwood scent' to the twist of Dylan's famous line which works so well. You have a wonderful style that is right up my reading street. Thank you. John
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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Ooh this is beautiful, from the moment you mix the senses of 'touch' and 'laugh', through the whispered sibilance of 'sandalwood scent' to the twist of Dylan's famous line which works so well. You have a wonderful style that is right up my reading street. Thank you. John
Comment Written 14-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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John,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hug
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Gypsy, I'm catching up trying to read the notes about your poem that's very interesting. first of all I like the overall presentation as always. I also like the sensory words in this poem. I especially love the line, touch your laugh. A laugh is so intangible, but it's just so very real too. There's so much of a poetry for me to learn and I hope to catch u with the club soon. Thank you for you informative and insightful author's note, as usual.
:)) Alex
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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Gypsy, I'm catching up trying to read the notes about your poem that's very interesting. first of all I like the overall presentation as always. I also like the sensory words in this poem. I especially love the line, touch your laugh. A laugh is so intangible, but it's just so very real too. There's so much of a poetry for me to learn and I hope to catch u with the club soon. Thank you for you informative and insightful author's note, as usual.
:)) Alex
Comment Written 14-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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Alex,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Of course! Well deserved!You're welcome. :)) Alex
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like many of your metaphors like "touching your laugh", "fall into your midnight eyes." They are very creative. Your Tanka has been coming along.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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I like many of your metaphors like "touching your laugh", "fall into your midnight eyes." They are very creative. Your Tanka has been coming along.
Excellent.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy