A Mermaid Who Soars
fantasy16 total reviews
Comment from Barry Penfold
No apologies needed. The advanced editor does some funny and frustrating things. Technology drives me nuts sometimes. Anyway, your poem is a good one and clearly portrays the soaring feeling. Please do not get too exhausted as it would be a pity not to have you do some more writing.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2023
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No apologies needed. The advanced editor does some funny and frustrating things. Technology drives me nuts sometimes. Anyway, your poem is a good one and clearly portrays the soaring feeling. Please do not get too exhausted as it would be a pity not to have you do some more writing.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2023
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I appreciate your encouraging words. Technology is frustrating. Thanks for reading and enjoying my soaring mermaid. Elaine
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good, too. You also use descriptive words and colorful imagery that draw in a reader.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2023
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This is an excellent poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good, too. You also use descriptive words and colorful imagery that draw in a reader.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
Comment Written 17-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2023
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Thank you so much. Elaine
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Elaine,
I felt myself flying above all my troubles and cares while reading your beautiful poem.
This work is exceptional.
It's nice that you get up and share your poems. I took up public speaking in school and never got over the jitters when giving a speech or reading a poem.
Good luck with this one!
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Elaine,
I felt myself flying above all my troubles and cares while reading your beautiful poem.
This work is exceptional.
It's nice that you get up and share your poems. I took up public speaking in school and never got over the jitters when giving a speech or reading a poem.
Good luck with this one!
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 12-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Thanks again for a generous amount of stars. Elaine
Comment from royowen
Of course the thought of a mermaid soaring above is a trifle anomalous, but we can all soar metaphorically above the earth, well done for cleverly creating this, thoughtful post, this is so beautifully written my friend, well done, I love this,
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Of course the thought of a mermaid soaring above is a trifle anomalous, but we can all soar metaphorically above the earth, well done for cleverly creating this, thoughtful post, this is so beautifully written my friend, well done, I love this,
Comment Written 10-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Thank you. Elaine
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Bless you
Comment from jim vecchio
I have font trouble, too, but yours was okay. It beats me how someone with an important, tiring job as your can still create such magic with your words.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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I have font trouble, too, but yours was okay. It beats me how someone with an important, tiring job as your can still create such magic with your words.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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I appreciate your kind words. Thank you so much. Elaine
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Being retired now, and mobility-impaired, I have lots of time for writing and am thankful for people like you!
Comment from JSD
The font is fine! This is a sweet and well-structured poem. The rhyme is unforced and the imagery successful. Well done.
John
"Seeing through a glass darkly."
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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The font is fine! This is a sweet and well-structured poem. The rhyme is unforced and the imagery successful. Well done.
John
"Seeing through a glass darkly."
Comment Written 05-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Thank you. Elaine
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, A Mermaid Who Soars, takes this opportunity to bring the mermaid up from waters of safety and into the skies to observe what life is like from another perspective. Cool.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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This poem, A Mermaid Who Soars, takes this opportunity to bring the mermaid up from waters of safety and into the skies to observe what life is like from another perspective. Cool.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Thank you. Elaine
Comment from kahpot
Beautiful, everyone would like to have a look outside their own world or environment I think, but also think they would welcome the chance to return, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Beautiful, everyone would like to have a look outside their own world or environment I think, but also think they would welcome the chance to return, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 26-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Thank you. Elaine
Comment from w.j.debi
I love the idea of a soaring mermaid. Why not? The Sirens originally had wings and then had mermaid tails so what is to keep the mermaid from adopting wings and flying? Maybe they've had that ability all along and you were the first to discover it. Shush. It may still be a secret.
Well written flight of fancy. Love it.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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I love the idea of a soaring mermaid. Why not? The Sirens originally had wings and then had mermaid tails so what is to keep the mermaid from adopting wings and flying? Maybe they've had that ability all along and you were the first to discover it. Shush. It may still be a secret.
Well written flight of fancy. Love it.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Thanks again for a generous amount of stars. Elaine
Comment from Aussie
Go to the front page of the computer: settings = fonts and size. Hello, little hugger with a tail to tell. Now this is a beautiful photo to compliment your story/poem. maybe she was sawing instead of flying? Hee, Hee. Anyway, you had the inspiration to write this and it is warm and wonderful - I love it. K xx
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Go to the front page of the computer: settings = fonts and size. Hello, little hugger with a tail to tell. Now this is a beautiful photo to compliment your story/poem. maybe she was sawing instead of flying? Hee, Hee. Anyway, you had the inspiration to write this and it is warm and wonderful - I love it. K xx
Comment Written 26-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Thanks again for a generous amount of stars. Elaine