My Kind Mom
She will always help me.3 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Henderson
Cute poem. It's clear you care about your mom. Think about your wording. Not sure you should say, "trust on." Also, "It is all fer her." Did you mean to spell "for" incorrectly?
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Cute poem. It's clear you care about your mom. Think about your wording. Not sure you should say, "trust on." Also, "It is all fer her." Did you mean to spell "for" incorrectly?
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Thank you for your review! Is this better for a five stars rating now? Please revise it.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This a beautiful love poems about your mom. I could very much relate. My mom was my best friend and my number one fan and moral support through my life. It's nice to read such a loving poem for your mom. If a mom teachers one how to value love, she is a good mom . Best wishes!
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2023
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This a beautiful love poems about your mom. I could very much relate. My mom was my best friend and my number one fan and moral support through my life. It's nice to read such a loving poem for your mom. If a mom teachers one how to value love, she is a good mom . Best wishes!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Simple and to the point, this is how I define this poem."It is all fer her.
She is always there for me.
I enjoy Mother's Day
I care about her." Did you mean to say it is all for her Thank you for sharing, and good luck with the contest and with your writing.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2023
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Simple and to the point, this is how I define this poem."It is all fer her.
She is always there for me.
I enjoy Mother's Day
I care about her." Did you mean to say it is all for her Thank you for sharing, and good luck with the contest and with your writing.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2023
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Thank you! Yes, I did mean it.