Comment from karenina

Excellent

Super adorable! A smile maker from first line to last. You didn't have to "day it"--you clever poet, you let us fill in the blanks!

This didn't win?

I demand a recount!

;)

Karenina

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2023

Comment from Nina Sexton

Good

What a cute love poem :)
Good luck in the contest! I hope Maybelle gets to see how you feel too. It made me nostalgic for young love again. Nice work.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2023

Thanks. You are much lovelier than Maybelle and so are your words!

reply by Nina Sexton on 09-Aug-2023

Thank you. Keep in touch, mystery writer!

reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023

Thank you! I something your comments!

reply by Nina Sexton on 10-Aug-2023

:)

reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023

I wish I were young again and meeting my wife again!

Comment from Bryce 1

Excellent

Sounds like an old bashful man who still has inhibitions like when he was young. He still feels the need to hold back his heart even with his woman. It's awfully picturesque, cute and flows well. Thank you!

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2023

Thank you for your very kind review!