This is whom I adore
A poem of worship.5 total reviews
Comment from JT traveller
Intriguing write and you have an extremely individual way of expressing yourself which I enjoyed.
A standout line for me, "His whisper is a melody of faith." Such beautifully chosen words. J
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Intriguing write and you have an extremely individual way of expressing yourself which I enjoyed.
A standout line for me, "His whisper is a melody of faith." Such beautifully chosen words. J
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Thank you, J. :) I'm glad you liked it. U still overseas?
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Yes. Flew out of Vietnam yesterday. Now in Thailand. Happy days.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A charming little verse with almost perfect unforced rhyming and a strong message of love inspired by faith. Your poem touches on the challenges that have beset you but, despite them, your belief has kept you from faltering further. Small edit: last stanza - 'choose' instead of 'chose.' This is a skilfully expressed verse fully fitting the contest brief. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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A charming little verse with almost perfect unforced rhyming and a strong message of love inspired by faith. Your poem touches on the challenges that have beset you but, despite them, your belief has kept you from faltering further. Small edit: last stanza - 'choose' instead of 'chose.' This is a skilfully expressed verse fully fitting the contest brief. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 09-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Thank you, Debbie. :) I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from jim vecchio
Another entry in this contest tht is truly worth a win! Thank you for honoring Our Lord and not using those usual terms which are "forbidden". What could be more worthy of (the word we shouldn't say here) than giving us life from death?
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Another entry in this contest tht is truly worth a win! Thank you for honoring Our Lord and not using those usual terms which are "forbidden". What could be more worthy of (the word we shouldn't say here) than giving us life from death?
Comment Written 09-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Thank you, Jim. :) I done wrote the poem so... I Love the Lord. :) I'm glad you liked it.
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Thank you for this posting!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
If sounds like you have love to give here in your love poem. But there is some hidden anxiety in your heart it seems as your faith will not leave you in peace, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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If sounds like you have love to give here in your love poem. But there is some hidden anxiety in your heart it seems as your faith will not leave you in peace, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 09-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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You can be my couch doctor anytime, Dolly. :) I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from royowen
A nicely written poem in excellent language and a smooth metric flow, in an unusual meter of 10/610/6 and a great theme of love poetry and good chance, good luck, blessings Roy
typo : cho(o)se your side.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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A nicely written poem in excellent language and a smooth metric flow, in an unusual meter of 10/610/6 and a great theme of love poetry and good chance, good luck, blessings Roy
typo : cho(o)se your side.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Thank you. Roy. :) I'm glad you liked it.
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Most welcome