2023 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Gypsies Tribe".
6 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
I can relate to moving, as a youngster we moved every two years, made schooling very hard, and hard to leave your heart anywhere, an excellent free verse, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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I can relate to moving, as a youngster we moved every two years, made schooling very hard, and hard to leave your heart anywhere, an excellent free verse, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ricky1024
Art or compliments Theme and Imagery.
This was well written rich m and imagery.
It read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Art or compliments Theme and Imagery.
This was well written rich m and imagery.
It read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
What a wonderful free verse, Gypsy. I was amazed at the pictures- the lovely young woman, followed by the flowers. Your words flowed nicely. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2023
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What a wonderful free verse, Gypsy. I was amazed at the pictures- the lovely young woman, followed by the flowers. Your words flowed nicely. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much, Aryr.... I appreciate your kind review and feedback. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from shelley kaye
aww this was a sweet and touching free verse with nice imagery and smooth flow
good pic... she looks like she is saying the words
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2023
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aww this was a sweet and touching free verse with nice imagery and smooth flow
good pic... she looks like she is saying the words
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 25-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much, Shelley. 😀 :)
Comment from lyenochka
What a lovely love poem! It shows that it's not the physical location that makes a loved one present. It's the beloved's presence everywhere. Moses said to God that "You have been our dwelling place through all generations" at a time when the Israelites traveled from place to place.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2023
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What a lovely love poem! It shows that it's not the physical location that makes a loved one present. It's the beloved's presence everywhere. Moses said to God that "You have been our dwelling place through all generations" at a time when the Israelites traveled from place to place.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review, big sister. I feel like a Gypsy sometimes... I have moved close to 30 times since I left Spain and as a child my family moved a lot.
Love
Marival
Comment from GWHARGIS
What a loving poem. I could imagine a mother writing this for their child. We can't always accompany them on their journey, but we can send our love with them. Lovely verse. Beautiful imagery throughout. Gretchen
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2023
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What a loving poem. I could imagine a mother writing this for their child. We can't always accompany them on their journey, but we can send our love with them. Lovely verse. Beautiful imagery throughout. Gretchen
Comment Written 24-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review, Gretchen. I feel like a Gypsy sometimes... I have moved close to 30 times since I left Spain and as a child my family moved a lot.