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Bated breath

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Comment from karenina
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Hah! What a fine ABC poem offering!
Your unique take is at once sweetly enchanting and very witty!

Those flowers are like ladies in waiting.

Best of luck with this one!

Karenina

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
    Yes, lol, Karenina, I did picture them as ladies in waiting.

    Thank you so much for your encouraging words.

    John
Comment from Lea Tonin1
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Lol...love it! It's like that though when the bees arrive they're everywhere l o l!
This is a great poem truly. love your word choices And how you portray the procreation of flower and what the flowers do while they're waiting for that very nice. I'd like to do a lit's a great picture you chose as well. I see, no issues with grammar esthetics. Sentence drops your spelling subject matter. You have a nice little pocket here with a splash of magic. Hope you have a great night and best of luck to you.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
    Thank you, Lea.
    What can I say, I am truly flattered by your thoughtful words. They mean a lot.

    John
Comment from donette1914
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simply outstanding and a great photo to be use in this fine piece. I like the way you write
very creative
well done
it was a pleasure to read your work
thank you for sharing this well penned poem and I hope for the best in the contest

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
    Thank you so much, Donette, for such lovely comments about my work. You made my day.

    John