Rendezvous
A lifetime dream come true7 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
This is wonderful story of a love developed in cyberspace and a couple who meets for the first time finding love that well last. The setting and interactions of the characters is developed well. The fact that this first goes so smoothly is amost too well orchestrated.
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This is wonderful story of a love developed in cyberspace and a couple who meets for the first time finding love that well last. The setting and interactions of the characters is developed well. The fact that this first goes so smoothly is amost too well orchestrated.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2023
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
A very lovely story. Told in a cascade of emotional musings. It was uplifting and joyful. No last-minute horror show of mismatched cups and saucers. Everything came together as you let us dream with you. Karen
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A very lovely story. Told in a cascade of emotional musings. It was uplifting and joyful. No last-minute horror show of mismatched cups and saucers. Everything came together as you let us dream with you. Karen
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
Comment from karenina
I'm glad you are so full of romantic optimism and can translate that beautifully into this story. I'm always a bit wary of "online" romances which suddenly seem to erupt into a forever love...
(Smacks of really good luck or a fairy tale ending and I'm maybe a little too cautious to believe in either --)
Still?
I suppose in this world that is the way things come together...and some of them must work!
I enjoyed this line best:
"a leap from the world of virtual reality into the tangible embrace of the present."
It's the core of your story...and if I suspend all disbelief I can be sept away by the rendezvous!
Karenina
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I'm glad you are so full of romantic optimism and can translate that beautifully into this story. I'm always a bit wary of "online" romances which suddenly seem to erupt into a forever love...
(Smacks of really good luck or a fairy tale ending and I'm maybe a little too cautious to believe in either --)
Still?
I suppose in this world that is the way things come together...and some of them must work!
I enjoyed this line best:
"a leap from the world of virtual reality into the tangible embrace of the present."
It's the core of your story...and if I suspend all disbelief I can be sept away by the rendezvous!
Karenina
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Well, my Bermudian friend, this entry is "An Affair to Remember ... or should that be imagined. A beautiful thesaurus of words blended into the palette of setting sunset
Good luck
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Well, my Bermudian friend, this entry is "An Affair to Remember ... or should that be imagined. A beautiful thesaurus of words blended into the palette of setting sunset
Good luck
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A romantic meeting on a beach with all the excitement, nerves and anticipation preempting this rendezvous following a long-distant virtual relationship. You write here with some fine imagery, Eugene, and recount a very happy and loving scene. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie
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A romantic meeting on a beach with all the excitement, nerves and anticipation preempting this rendezvous following a long-distant virtual relationship. You write here with some fine imagery, Eugene, and recount a very happy and loving scene. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
Comment from Lea Tonin1
I wonderful wonderful poem I hope that there are those in life that experience that. You are a wordsmith, there's no doubt combined with your talent. You're producing some absolutely wonderful work. Can you imagine such lovely connections in rendezvous, wow, got the brain buzzing now. I see, no issues with grammar or statics. It's a wonderful submission I wish you best of luck!
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I wonderful wonderful poem I hope that there are those in life that experience that. You are a wordsmith, there's no doubt combined with your talent. You're producing some absolutely wonderful work. Can you imagine such lovely connections in rendezvous, wow, got the brain buzzing now. I see, no issues with grammar or statics. It's a wonderful submission I wish you best of luck!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
Comment from Wendyanne
I really enjoyed this very well written piece of fiction based on the idea od a rendezvous. You have described their thoughts and feelings vividly and I can picture the romantic scene. Good luck.
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I really enjoyed this very well written piece of fiction based on the idea od a rendezvous. You have described their thoughts and feelings vividly and I can picture the romantic scene. Good luck.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023