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Nov. 2023 Letter to God

Letter to God expressing my concerns.

35 total reviews 
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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Yes! How did I miss this one? I guess I don't get all of your messages either. This is indeed a winner. You said all the right things here Beth. We do take a lot for granted and expect more than we should when we pray. I try just to lay it out and wait for him to solve the problem now in my old age. We must be carful what we ask for. This would be a six if I had one. NAncy:)

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
    Thank you Nancy. I appreciate the review. It's been five years since I won first on any FanStory committee contest, so I was surprised. It found it helps to write a prayer out becuase you can organize ;your thoughts better. Othersize, I just any what I'm feeling at the moment and leave it to God to figure out what I really need.
Comment from Terry Broxson
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Beth, I liked your letter, and it is well written, and it's understandable why you won the contest. Your letter got me thinking in a direction you may not have intended. After finishing the piece. I wondered if it's okay to question God.

My answer is "Yes, it is okay." It is how we learn. Seek and you will find. I'm wondering about a contest. What would you Question God About?

What do you think? Terry.


 Comment Written 10-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
    Thank you Terry. When I review other people work, what they have written always makes own mind react in ways they may not have intended. They inspire me. If my prayer did that for you, I am honored. The Bible says "ask and you shall receive" so I guess that means if you ask questions, you'll receive answers. When I writing for contest, I just ask God for inspiration with the writing. I sometimes think of things, I have no idea where they come from. Before I wrote the prayer, I questioned if my words to God should be shared in a contest. I assume the answer was yes, since I felt it okay to write it and writing it helped get my thoughts more organized.
Comment from KandyKam
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I think God needs more letters of gratitude from each of us, knowing the conditions we're living in. We shall be more than grateful when we live to see another dawn.Thank you for sharing, Beth. This is beautiful.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
    Thank you so much Kandy. I'm pleased you liked it. I really appreciate the review and comments.
    Beth
reply by KandyKam on 08-Nov-2023
    You're very welcome, Beth.
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Beth,
Congratulations on winning the contest with this wonderful prayer all of us can relate to . It should be one said more often than it is.
Have a great rest of the week.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
    Thank you so much John, I really appreciate the review and comments.
    Beth
reply by dragonpoet on 08-Nov-2023
    You are most kindly welcome on all accounts, z CC vid
Comment from Enrico Langfordino
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I have awarded this prayer a 'sixer' though I am a non believer as such Beth. It says perfectly what many believers would wish to say to that being we so admire. Well worthy of the accolades awarded it.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
    Thank you so much Enrico. It is very special that you consider it worthy of six stars. I am honored.
    Beth
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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I liked reading this. Thank you for posting it. Congratulations on your win, too! I did not enter this contest, so the congratulations are absolutely 100
% sincere. Guess we all need to work on not needing to always be right but to listen to what Someone and others say. Nice share.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
    Thank you so much for the excellent review and congratulations. I really appreciate getting the six stars.
    Beth
Comment from zanni
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I feel very thankful to have the opportunity to read this letter, which I experienced as a respectful and heartfelt prayer from which I learned a lot.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
    Thank you so much Zanni. I appreciate your comments and review. Even though it was meant for a contest. I did mean everything I said.
    Beth
reply by zanni on 08-Nov-2023
    Yes, it came through that this was a heartfelt prayer
Comment from Contests

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A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
    Thank you, I am honored. This is a lovely surprise.
    Beth
Comment from Wendyanne
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Hi Beth. I enjoyed reading your letter to God and I echo your thoughts and feelings very much. I can particularly relate to this line as I am a very impatient person,
"Give me patience, and help me to realize your timing is always perfect, and I shouldn't get discouraged when my prayers aren't always answered immediately". Good luck.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
    Thank you Wendy. I agree with you patience isn't easy. We want things without having to wait. I appreciate the review.
    Beth
Comment from Bill Schott
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This, Letter to God, is one I am certain is being repeated all over this country and the world. 1 Corinthians 13:12 KJV
'For now we see through a glass, darkly; but then face to face: now I know in part; but then shall I know even as also I am known."

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
    Thank you Bill, I appreciate the review. Yes, there is a whole we are seeing clearly this side of the veil. I believe our questions will eventually be answered. I'm pleased you gave me my 26th review.