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You Only Think You Know Them

People are like icebergs: so much below the surface!

39 total reviews 
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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I wish I had read it tomorrow I would have given a six. I had to troll a bit to find something I had not read. I have read most all your stuff since I got here.
This is just divine, the poetry and the picture. Karen

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
    Thank you for this; that is really lovely to read. xo
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 07-Apr-2024
    :-)
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This is an excellent poem with good imagery and descriptions. You chose excellent descriptive words. It is set up and presented well too enjoyed reviewing this.

Best wishes!

Alex

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
    Thanks for the positive reinforcement, Alex; I appreciate it very much. xo
reply by Alexandra Trovato on 19-Feb-2024
    You're welcome. xo
Comment from pome lover
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Bravo, Rachelle!
A thoughtful, rhythmic and pythy poem; each subject having a good moral.
Congratulations of being recognized and for All Time Best.
I think if I ever received one of those, I'd faint dead away.
So, how are your students? Delightful as always?
Katharine

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
    Hey, Katharine!
    Thank you for this really beautiful review. Very much appreciated.

    Yep, the kiddos (and adults, too; I have more grown-ups this year than I've ever had!) are doing great. How's life with you?

    xoxoxo
reply by pome lover on 14-Feb-2024
    Fine. Have been outside, planting Indian Hawthorn in big pots. They are pretty hardy. Am hoping my plants that look dead that I uncovered too soon, (brilliant) will get new growth - those that have green down in their stems.
    Had knee aspirated the other day. not fun, but swelling's gone. Aren't you glad to hear all this? :)
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
    Yes! I asked, and you shared. That's the nature of friendship. It doesn't have to be glamorous; just honest!! xoxo
Comment from Jeano
Exceptional
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I am sitting here in awe. I think this is the most beautiful and meaningful poem I've ever read. The bar is so high with this one, I don't see how you can lose. Good luck with this contest.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
    I did win the original contest, and I appreciate this wonderful review. thank you, Jeano. xoxo
Comment from Ramona Agin
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I love this poem! You've captured the dual sides of people's personas in such a way that the reader can see them and feel their personalities. I love the way your characters and words rhyme and just dance and flow down the page. I can tell you really must observe people a lot to be able to describe them so well.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
    Thank you for noticing all these parts that I worked hard to achieve. It's always nice to know what "lands" with one's readers. xo
Comment from Annmuma
Exceptional
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So true! It is easy to make judgements on what we see, but as the proverb suggest 'Walk a mile in their shoes' before deciding who they truly are. Exceptional poem. ann

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
    You're so right, Ann. I read the best book years ago by an author named Sarah Ban Breathneck, and in it, she said the best way to ever stop yourself from coveting anyone else's life is to understand that you wouldn't get to pick-and-choose just the "good" parts. You would have to have every part of it. So, yes, maybe you'd get their beautiful skin, but you'd also be saddled with a horrible mother-in-law. The way things looks on the outside are just the teeniest portion of anyone's life.

    Thanks for this really nice review, and the additional star, as well. Very much appreciated. xo
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Exceptional
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Outstanding! Delightful, compelling and engaging narrative. I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you so much for sharing this. I found myself picturing each example as I read through the verse. Exceptional work!

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
    What a really nice review. Thank you for this very much, Brenda. xo
reply by Brenda Henderson on 05-Jan-2024
    You're very welcome!
Comment from Spitfire
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

The first eight stanzas create two different images. Borrowing from your book the lessons learned are stated in the last two. A lot of different emotions in this creative poem. You're a genius, Rachel.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
    Omg. You SWEET-TALKIN' REVIEWER, you!! Thank you for always being so extremely generous to me, Spitfire!! So very appreciated. xoxoxo
Comment from ElPoetry001
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Excellent.
You have covered areas where those in power can create a high bar or a limbo bar challenge that cannot be met.

Government, Hollywood, and fashion, designate status levels

Your answer is clear.
History tells us that If you "assume" you make an a** out of you and me.
Ass u me.

Well done.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
    I remember that joke! It's always a good one.

    Thanks for this really nice review, ElPoetry001! I appreciate it very much. xo
reply by ElPoetry001 on 04-Jan-2024
    Stay well
Comment from Terry Broxson
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Rachelle, this is a really good and very creative poem. I do wish I had a six left...so, I will make it a virtual seven! To heck with the system, or words to that effect.

Your message is also really good. Exceptional work! Tery.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
    Ohh! I know what the words are to that effect, I bet!!

    Thanks for the this nice review, Terry, and the virtual seven. Very much appreciated. xo
reply by Terry Broxson on 04-Jan-2024
    Now, how in the world does a genteel lady like you know words to that effect? Oh wait, I might be confused.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
    It's from all the reading I do, don'tcha know...