Truth
20 syllable poem28 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Congratulations on the win! sorry n I'm just getting to the review note-- it's handy to dat Kudos on a jib well done!
"The edge of silence"
It never of those I wish my muse had thought of that phrases!
Karenina
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Congratulations on the win! sorry n I'm just getting to the review note-- it's handy to dat Kudos on a jib well done!
"The edge of silence"
It never of those I wish my muse had thought of that phrases!
Karenina
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much Karenina. And I also want to thank you for always commenting on everyone's profile page when they have a win. You are so wonderful to share your thoughts with consideration and grace. Hugs!
Melissa
Comment from Elizabeth Walton
This is excellent, words that can be interpreted many ways. This has potential to mean something to anyone. I congratulate you on your win. Well done!
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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This is excellent, words that can be interpreted many ways. This has potential to mean something to anyone. I congratulate you on your win. Well done!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Elizabeth! I am so honored :)
Melissa
Comment from Sally Law
I missed this beauty being sick during the first half of January. Beautifully written poem in an economy of words, my friend. Congratulations on your well deserved blue ribbon. Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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I missed this beauty being sick during the first half of January. Beautifully written poem in an economy of words, my friend. Congratulations on your well deserved blue ribbon. Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Hello Sally. Thank you so much!!! I am surprised and honored :)
Melissa
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Melissa,
Nice majestic photo to go with the poems meaning. It reminds us that Jesus often went to mountains to pray. Silence brings you closer to God.
In seclusion you can feel prayers being listened to.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Have a great weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Hi Melissa,
Nice majestic photo to go with the poems meaning. It reminds us that Jesus often went to mountains to pray. Silence brings you closer to God.
In seclusion you can feel prayers being listened to.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Have a great weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Hello Joan. Thank you so much for your lovely words and review. I agree that in silence, you do draw closer to God!! So appreciate you.
Melissa
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You are most kindly welcome, Melissa.
Joan
Comment from Caroline M England
Simply beautiful. Beautifully simple.
This poem speaks truly to my heart. Perfectly executed. I really don't need 150 characters to express how lovely it is! Really well done!
Best wishes
Caroline
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Simply beautiful. Beautifully simple.
This poem speaks truly to my heart. Perfectly executed. I really don't need 150 characters to express how lovely it is! Really well done!
Best wishes
Caroline
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Hello Caroline.... I am so honored by your note and review of my little poem. Thank you so much!
Melissa
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Thank you so very much for this selection!
Melissa
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Thank you so very much for this selection!
Melissa
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Instead an unknown "he", I think it would be better to use "I". Just my thoughts. Picture is divine, and your poetry is lovely. And your choice of a mat with the briefest of colors brings out your poetry. :-) Karen
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Instead an unknown "he", I think it would be better to use "I". Just my thoughts. Picture is divine, and your poetry is lovely. And your choice of a mat with the briefest of colors brings out your poetry. :-) Karen
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Hey Karen. Thanks so much for the suggestion and lovely review. I will go take a look and see how it flows. I really appreciate your comments!
Melissa
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You are welcome.:-) Karen
Comment from tempeste
To do some Soul searching one must be in a quiet place
And better still be merged in mother nature's embrace, like in that stunning canyon ( in Arizona ) seen above.
My silent haven are my scented pine forests and earthy woods , where I can hear and talk to my inner voice.
A beautiful offering
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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To do some Soul searching one must be in a quiet place
And better still be merged in mother nature's embrace, like in that stunning canyon ( in Arizona ) seen above.
My silent haven are my scented pine forests and earthy woods , where I can hear and talk to my inner voice.
A beautiful offering
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Hello dear Franca. Thank you for your wonderful review. I loved visiting the canyon and seeing that vastness and greatness of canyon and sky. It is a lifetime memory. I am glad you have a place you can go and tune it with nature. I so appreciate you!
Melissa
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Great entry for the 20 Syllable Poem contest.
Excellent presentation and word imagery.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Great entry for the 20 Syllable Poem contest.
Excellent presentation and word imagery.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Thank you Gypsy. So appreciate you!
Melissa
Comment from patcelaw
I like how you stated he discovered deep truths on the edge of silence. I think many of us will find that our deep truths will come when we're very silent and have a chance to listen to what our heart is telling us. Patricia.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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I like how you stated he discovered deep truths on the edge of silence. I think many of us will find that our deep truths will come when we're very silent and have a chance to listen to what our heart is telling us. Patricia.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Thanks so much, Patricia. So appreciate you taking the time and sending me a lovely review.
Melissa