Guided by Faith
Viewing comments for Chapter 46 "Chapter 29"Can faith guide our path?
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Comment from Brett Matthew West
In line above "Today's Post" "those feeling" should be those feelings or perhaps that feeling.
Should "Tell Me Jesus Stories" not be Tell Me The Stories of Jesus?
"Jakes eyes" should be Jake's eye to show he possesses them.
Emma needed to knee Ronnie right in the bazinga like she did.
Seems Jake and Emma are having feelings they are not sure how to handle.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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In line above "Today's Post" "those feeling" should be those feelings or perhaps that feeling.
Should "Tell Me Jesus Stories" not be Tell Me The Stories of Jesus?
"Jakes eyes" should be Jake's eye to show he possesses them.
Emma needed to knee Ronnie right in the bazinga like she did.
Seems Jake and Emma are having feelings they are not sure how to handle.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the kind review and the help. I made the corrections.
Comment from Sandollar
I enjoyed the story. It's religious, true, but you didn't knock us down with it. I have been pulling for Seth since the beginning. There's nothing wrong with abstinence. If it makes a person more comfortable to wait, they should definitely do so. While reading the in-church scene it made me smile. I felt right at home.
I found one error. Closing his eyes, Seth took deep breathes. "No, but I bet you're right. How do I approach this?" He paused. "Maybe Susan did.
Suppose you meant took many breaths. Nice work!
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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I enjoyed the story. It's religious, true, but you didn't knock us down with it. I have been pulling for Seth since the beginning. There's nothing wrong with abstinence. If it makes a person more comfortable to wait, they should definitely do so. While reading the in-church scene it made me smile. I felt right at home.
I found one error. Closing his eyes, Seth took deep breathes. "No, but I bet you're right. How do I approach this?" He paused. "Maybe Susan did.
Suppose you meant took many breaths. Nice work!
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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I have made the correction. I appreciate you dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Emma knew how to handle a guy who was trying to force himself on her, but she could have made another enemy. Seth and Emma need to get to the alter soon, or his frustration could grow.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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Emma knew how to handle a guy who was trying to force himself on her, but she could have made another enemy. Seth and Emma need to get to the alter soon, or his frustration could grow.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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It surely will. Sami's life will be turned upside down soon. Seth won't have a chance to worry about his desires. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I'm glad Seth and Emma had the conversation that has been the pink elephant in the room. Seth obviously cares very much about Emma and doesn't want to rush to anything. It's a difficult place to be in. But now they both know how to navigate their relationship.
I like how Emma delt with Ronald... good for her!
Well done, Barbara. I always look forward to reading your chapters.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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I'm glad Seth and Emma had the conversation that has been the pink elephant in the room. Seth obviously cares very much about Emma and doesn't want to rush to anything. It's a difficult place to be in. But now they both know how to navigate their relationship.
I like how Emma delt with Ronald... good for her!
Well done, Barbara. I always look forward to reading your chapters.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Barbara,
there is quite a bit of detail here, it can be a little hard to stay involved, but it is a good story. It appears that Ronnie needs a little attention from the strong hand of the law. The guy's a world class jerk.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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Hello Barbara,
there is quite a bit of detail here, it can be a little hard to stay involved, but it is a good story. It appears that Ronnie needs a little attention from the strong hand of the law. The guy's a world class jerk.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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We will see Ronnie again. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Yes, this was a little
Longer but a great read. I don't think that the Ronnie fella is going to stop bugging here.
Anyways, are couples supposed to talk that much? Who knew? Ha! Maybe that's where I screw up.
Good stuff!
D
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Yes, this was a little
Longer but a great read. I don't think that the Ronnie fella is going to stop bugging here.
Anyways, are couples supposed to talk that much? Who knew? Ha! Maybe that's where I screw up.
Good stuff!
D
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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LOL Yes, couples need to talk. How else will anything ever get accomplished. My husband probably thinks I talk too much. He's got after all these years to just accept it. He told one of our sons the other day, that when I'm in a situation where I can't talk, I have to make up for it when I get home. LOL
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Ha! It?s a woman thing.
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Sure is and I own it. LOL
Comment from Jacob1395
Excellent dialogue between Seth and Emma again Barbara and I really liked the pace of this chapter. You set the scene really well and their dialogue really brings out the emotions well. Another engaging read.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Excellent dialogue between Seth and Emma again Barbara and I really liked the pace of this chapter. You set the scene really well and their dialogue really brings out the emotions well. Another engaging read.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Paul McFarland
The story is moving along very nicely, Barb. Glad to see that Emma and Seth are becoming more comfortable with each other. I think I've had enough of Ronnie Calhoun.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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The story is moving along very nicely, Barb. Glad to see that Emma and Seth are becoming more comfortable with each other. I think I've had enough of Ronnie Calhoun.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, and let the pure love begin, which is so rare nowadays. I guess they don't want to rush into a marriage until they figure it out if what they feel is real and constant. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Wow, and let the pure love begin, which is so rare nowadays. I guess they don't want to rush into a marriage until they figure it out if what they feel is real and constant. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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I believe that's how it should be. You should know and trust your partner completely before rushing into a marriage. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
An excellent chapter that covers a number of issues. You did a good job covering the church service, followed by Emma's announcements and playing her guitar. It seems Ronnie Calhoun is always at the wrong place at the wrong time. Hopefully, there will be an opportunity for someone to do something about his behavior toward Emma.
The middle section is very good as Jake and Seth have a good discussion about personal issues and how to deal with them. That is followed up with Seth and Emma sharing their feelings. It is always a good idea so each understands where the other is coming from.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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An excellent chapter that covers a number of issues. You did a good job covering the church service, followed by Emma's announcements and playing her guitar. It seems Ronnie Calhoun is always at the wrong place at the wrong time. Hopefully, there will be an opportunity for someone to do something about his behavior toward Emma.
The middle section is very good as Jake and Seth have a good discussion about personal issues and how to deal with them. That is followed up with Seth and Emma sharing their feelings. It is always a good idea so each understands where the other is coming from.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you fro the encouragement.
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You are welcome.