2024 Japanese Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Summer"x
6 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Aw yes, you do say it all in this wonderful Gogyohka, Marival. It's the epitome of summer where nature meet young passion. I loved it. What a beautiful presentation. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Aw yes, you do say it all in this wonderful Gogyohka, Marival. It's the epitome of summer where nature meet young passion. I loved it. What a beautiful presentation. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Ulla.
Con cariņo,
Marival
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Your well-chosen words were perfect to evoke the passion of these young lovers. Not only that, but the scene you also painted with words was absolutely beautiful. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Your well-chosen words were perfect to evoke the passion of these young lovers. Not only that, but the scene you also painted with words was absolutely beautiful. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
Oh what memories you have brought back "novice passion" those most wonderful (clumsy-explorative days (months) very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Oh what memories you have brought back "novice passion" those most wonderful (clumsy-explorative days (months) very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Kym have a great day.
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Comment from GWHARGIS
This was such a fresh view of summer. The young lovers so innocent and pure. The flirtatious sun and the flowers. This was a beautiful and refreshing poem. Great writing. Gretchen
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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This was such a fresh view of summer. The young lovers so innocent and pure. The flirtatious sun and the flowers. This was a beautiful and refreshing poem. Great writing. Gretchen
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day, Gretchen.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
wow very rich summer love imagery
nice word choices and smooth flow through the lines
great colours and pics, too!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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wow very rich summer love imagery
nice word choices and smooth flow through the lines
great colours and pics, too!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day, Shelley.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Sugarray77
As usual, you excel in your writing of Japanese forms. This is lovely and you have painted it with the tangerine of summer. I enjoyed reading this and thinks its lovely.
Melissa
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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As usual, you excel in your writing of Japanese forms. This is lovely and you have painted it with the tangerine of summer. I enjoyed reading this and thinks its lovely.
Melissa
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day, Melissa.
Gypsy hugs