Morning Skies
Gratitude31 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation, Janet.
-Your notes are appreciated and I agree with you
about appreciating beauty that is around us.
-You wrote a very good poem about it
that paints a vivid word picture.
-Excellent use of color and comparisons in verse one.
-The songbirds sing and the sun is rising providing warmth.
-The next verse is very good, and a very good concluding verse
"that brings me peace and happiness."
-Very well done; thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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-Very nice image and presentation, Janet.
-Your notes are appreciated and I agree with you
about appreciating beauty that is around us.
-You wrote a very good poem about it
that paints a vivid word picture.
-Excellent use of color and comparisons in verse one.
-The songbirds sing and the sun is rising providing warmth.
-The next verse is very good, and a very good concluding verse
"that brings me peace and happiness."
-Very well done; thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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Thank you Pam for your detailed and encouraging review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Blessings
Janet
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You are very welcome, Janet. I always enjoy your writing.
Comment from mermaids
Your words remind me of all the natural gifts God gives us. Your vivid use of words creates a picture of the natural world in all her beauty.Baby blue and sapphire are beautiful colors that show God's presence
You have a smooth poetic form with a light feel and flow to your words. I want to go outside and observe the beauty of nature.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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Your words remind me of all the natural gifts God gives us. Your vivid use of words creates a picture of the natural world in all her beauty.Baby blue and sapphire are beautiful colors that show God's presence
You have a smooth poetic form with a light feel and flow to your words. I want to go outside and observe the beauty of nature.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your detailed and encouraging review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Dawn Munro
"From baby blue to bold sapphire." Just one example of beautiful assonance...
What a lovely poem -- absolutely flawless, and so evocative! The enjambment, too, is fabulous -- as smooth as silk. (Fresh out of sixes this week! :((
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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"From baby blue to bold sapphire." Just one example of beautiful assonance...
What a lovely poem -- absolutely flawless, and so evocative! The enjambment, too, is fabulous -- as smooth as silk. (Fresh out of sixes this week! :((
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your detailed and encouraging review. I appreciate the poetic devices you noted.
Blessings
Janet
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You are very welcome. It was my pleasure. :)
Comment from Tyler Withrow
I really like this site because it gives me the ability to look into worlds created by others. Your rhyme scheme is incredible and a true gift that you get to share with others.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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I really like this site because it gives me the ability to look into worlds created by others. Your rhyme scheme is incredible and a true gift that you get to share with others.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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Thank you Tyler for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Yusita
This is such a soothing, refreshing, and beautiful poem which brought me peace. I thoroughly enjoyed all the lovely imagery... it was a treat for my mind's eye. I wish I had a 6 left to give, but please accept a virtual one!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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This is such a soothing, refreshing, and beautiful poem which brought me peace. I thoroughly enjoyed all the lovely imagery... it was a treat for my mind's eye. I wish I had a 6 left to give, but please accept a virtual one!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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Thank Pam for your encouraging review and the virtual six. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from papa55mike
I think the Lord does an amazing job with His sunrises. Those delicate brush strokes from the hand of a Master. What a wonderfully written poem. I wish I had a six for you. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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I think the Lord does an amazing job with His sunrises. Those delicate brush strokes from the hand of a Master. What a wonderfully written poem. I wish I had a six for you. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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Thank you Mike for your encouraging review and virtual six stars.
I always appreciate hearing from you.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from estory
A celebration of the dawn, in classic romantic form and style. You had the classic rhyme scheme, the meter, and the classic pastoral images of the sublime softness of the dawning sky. There's a great sense of opening out, of lifting up, of hope. estory
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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A celebration of the dawn, in classic romantic form and style. You had the classic rhyme scheme, the meter, and the classic pastoral images of the sublime softness of the dawning sky. There's a great sense of opening out, of lifting up, of hope. estory
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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Thank you estory for your detailed and encouraging review.
I always appreciate hearing from you.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Lisasview
Luckily for me and maybe because I am creative I constantly see and appreciate the beauty all around us...from our friend, to the sky..aand on and on.
Such a lovely poem dear Janet.
All my very best,
Lisa
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Luckily for me and maybe because I am creative I constantly see and appreciate the beauty all around us...from our friend, to the sky..aand on and on.
Such a lovely poem dear Janet.
All my very best,
Lisa
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Lisa, for this lovely and encouraging review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from jake cosmos aller
good poem about appreciating nature's beauty all around us and reflecting upon life and our place in the cosmic scheme of things. I like the imagery of this poem.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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good poem about appreciating nature's beauty all around us and reflecting upon life and our place in the cosmic scheme of things. I like the imagery of this poem.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you Jake for this thoughtful and encouraging review. I am so pleased that you enjoyed it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from patcelaw
This is so beautifully poetically worded that it is a pleasure to listen to. There is nothing quite like the morning sky. When the sun comes up over the mountains and we see it in all of its vivid colors. I enjoyed your poem very much and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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This is so beautifully poetically worded that it is a pleasure to listen to. There is nothing quite like the morning sky. When the sun comes up over the mountains and we see it in all of its vivid colors. I enjoyed your poem very much and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you Patricia for this lovely review and the special stars. I am so pleased that you enjoyed it.
Blessings
Janet