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The Phases of Man

A 3-6-9 poem about the three stages of man's life.

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Comment from jessizero
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I liked your take on the Sphinx's riddle.
I'm not sure, but I think "that as a babe were only imagined." has one syllable too many.
Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
    You're right about the only imagined. Thank you for catching it. I will go in and correct it.
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a very well written three -6-9 poem for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest and you have a wonderful day and may God bless you richly with all of his good pleasures. Patricia .

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
    Your rating and comments are sincerely appreciated. Thank you so much.