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Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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We all have dark nights of the soul. I do several things when I need help: Make it a little cold in the room so you can get under the heated blanket. It helps sleep. Studies have also proven that a heavier blanket can give you the "swaddled" effect and make you feel safe. Don't have an electric blanket? Throw your blanket in the dryer. Hope something helps. Karen

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 10-Mar-2024
    :-)
Comment from royowen
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I was reading only yesterday, that unless we turn our lives completely over to God, we are doing ourselves a complete disservice by not doing sol only then will we be able to Claim what is the whole peace of God, well done, blessings Roy
Typo a prayer (raises) rises?

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much, Roy.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by royowen on 08-Mar-2024
    welcome
Comment from Baltimore Born
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This is a well-written poem. The first stanza starts off with a good simile. The message in your poem is good. The last stanza sums the poem well. We do like to be in control of our situations, but turning things over to God gives us peace. Nice poem.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy
reply by Baltimore Born on 08-Mar-2024
    You are welcome.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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God can bring us peace. We just need to go to with a willing heart. Thank you for sharing another beautiful presentation with us. Do you write these poems while trying to get back to sleep? My muse wakes me in the middle of night and plants scenes in my mind for me to write.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara.

    I wake up sometimes with ideas for a haiku I write it down but in the morning is bad. LoL

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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you're not alone! i've also been waking late at night not being able to fall back asleep for awhile... then by the time i do, it's time to get up LOL!

a great gogyohka suite about riding the wave of anxieties...
excellent imagery and smooth line to line flow

thank you for sharing
shelley :)


 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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Those are the best times to pray. I really liked your opening stanza of the prayer rising like an orphan to our loving God who meets all our needs and understands our frailties as humans.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
    I wrote you a long message and I hit something and it disappeared. (*~*) I will tell you later. It was basically things that happened that reinforced God heard my prayer. It was amazing.

    Thank you very much, big sister.

    Love,

    Marival
Comment from mrsmajor
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A very thought provoking post, Gypsy, it's odd because for some reason I have been feeling the same way for the last few weeks, not because of any illness....I think it's the world and all the negatives that's showing up, here there, and everywhere.

But, like You, there's a loving God, that's always with us...all we have to do is Pray!
He told us, ask and your Prayer will be heard...
Blessings from God, for you and a kind and loving thought from me.

Sleep well tonight!
I'm going to do that, and so should you.
oxoxox!

Warmly,
Victoria

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much, Victoria. You are right about the negative energy. The news are really depressing.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by mrsmajor on 07-Mar-2024
    You're very welcome, Gypsy, sometimes I just have to turn away from what's going on...for a moment!
    All the best for you.....and another great big Hug!

    Warmly,
    Victoria
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Very nicely written poem. I find myself waking up early being I go to bed too early. The later I stay up, the better the night. Your words do prove that you might be a little weary; but like me, God is always there.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much, Rosemary.

    gypsy hugs