2024 Japanese Poetry
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10 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Such a cool picture! And your poem reminds me that the Lord has unconditional love for all of us. With faith in Him, we can be cleansed and redeemed by Him.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Such a cool picture! And your poem reminds me that the Lord has unconditional love for all of us. With faith in Him, we can be cleansed and redeemed by Him.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Yes, that was my intention. Thank you, big sister.
Love,
Marival
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This club entry is both beautifully written and beautifully presented but had a wonderful spiritual message. I enjoyed this entire presentation. Your talent glows.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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This club entry is both beautifully written and beautifully presented but had a wonderful spiritual message. I enjoyed this entire presentation. Your talent glows.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
nice spiritual busso
deeply meaningful
with a air of hopefulness
nice imagery of cleansing water
smoothly flowing bath of unconditional love - cool image!
love that second pic!!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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nice spiritual busso
deeply meaningful
with a air of hopefulness
nice imagery of cleansing water
smoothly flowing bath of unconditional love - cool image!
love that second pic!!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Glenda Collins
Beautiful poem. Love the bible verse and the education on the BUSSO poem in your author's notes. The picture is very interesting with this poem, for me it evokes thought about our true provider and what our real needs are. Thanks for sharing.
Glenda
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Beautiful poem. Love the bible verse and the education on the BUSSO poem in your author's notes. The picture is very interesting with this poem, for me it evokes thought about our true provider and what our real needs are. Thanks for sharing.
Glenda
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
What a wonderful read, I read this one a few times, and satisfaction of/in my life seems to be in these words, to me, whether the cup be half full or empty, it is enough, very intriguing and well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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What a wonderful read, I read this one a few times, and satisfaction of/in my life seems to be in these words, to me, whether the cup be half full or empty, it is enough, very intriguing and well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Douglas Goff
The play on words is very nice, but I really love that dark tone with a couple of colored lines. It serves to emphasize those lines spectacularly. I hope you don't mind if I try that with one of my pieces. It looks way cool!
Have an awesome evening!
Douglas
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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The play on words is very nice, but I really love that dark tone with a couple of colored lines. It serves to emphasize those lines spectacularly. I hope you don't mind if I try that with one of my pieces. It looks way cool!
Have an awesome evening!
Douglas
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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I don't mind at all. I like to encourage people to be creative and have fun.
Douglas, Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
The imagery in your poem is vivid. For me it painted a picture of nature's cleansing power. I thought that was very creative. It's a well written poem that flows perfectly. And, as always, I love how you present your poems from the poem itself to the images you choose.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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The imagery in your poem is vivid. For me it painted a picture of nature's cleansing power. I thought that was very creative. It's a well written poem that flows perfectly. And, as always, I love how you present your poems from the poem itself to the images you choose.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
What a very cool idea!! It looks great! Very moving and artistic! This is an excellent poem with good imagery words and colorful descriptions. Thanks for sharing it.
Best wishes,
Alexan :)
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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What a very cool idea!! It looks great! Very moving and artistic! This is an excellent poem with good imagery words and colorful descriptions. Thanks for sharing it.
Best wishes,
Alexan :)
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Looks like a twister within half glass and then disappears into a cloud of fluff. I've been trying to figure out what this image is actually describing. Is it to do with the weather?
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Looks like a twister within half glass and then disappears into a cloud of fluff. I've been trying to figure out what this image is actually describing. Is it to do with the weather?
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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No, it has nothing to do with the weather. It's about believing God will provide and I use nature (rain, clouds, rivers, oceans, etc.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from patcelaw
This is wonderfully worded in your presentation is beautiful. I enjoyed reading it very much and I wish you the very best weekend that you could ever have. God bless you and have a good day. Patricia .
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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This is wonderfully worded in your presentation is beautiful. I enjoyed reading it very much and I wish you the very best weekend that you could ever have. God bless you and have a good day. Patricia .
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs