Saturate My Soul!
The Bible Lives and Stands3 total reviews
Comment from SimianSavant
Incredibly creative choice of word for your acrostic. I looked it up myself before seeing your note at the bottom. The picture goes well with the text.
The only thing I would consider changing is dialing down the boldness of the letters in the acrostic, as they are visually overwhelming and running into the rest of your text. (I am reading this on a laptop, not a phone, but it probably shows the same there). This might require a different font choice. I also suggest putting a little more space to the left of your "I" so that it centers with the other letters. This is a common problem with non-truetype fonts. I assume you did this in the advanced editor and can do that easily there (otherwise, use the " " to force an extra whitespace character before it in the basic editor).
Thanks for the read, and good luck!
Harambe (for President)
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Incredibly creative choice of word for your acrostic. I looked it up myself before seeing your note at the bottom. The picture goes well with the text.
The only thing I would consider changing is dialing down the boldness of the letters in the acrostic, as they are visually overwhelming and running into the rest of your text. (I am reading this on a laptop, not a phone, but it probably shows the same there). This might require a different font choice. I also suggest putting a little more space to the left of your "I" so that it centers with the other letters. This is a common problem with non-truetype fonts. I assume you did this in the advanced editor and can do that easily there (otherwise, use the " " to force an extra whitespace character before it in the basic editor).
Thanks for the read, and good luck!
Harambe (for President)
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much! Sorry I fell behind. I'm grateful! I value your suggestions and comments.
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
This is a perfect entry for this Bible Acrostic contest!
Faith is water for the soul, "utterly quenching our every need." I wish you all the luck in this contest!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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This is a perfect entry for this Bible Acrostic contest!
Faith is water for the soul, "utterly quenching our every need." I wish you all the luck in this contest!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Unfortunately, I m changing it so they won't disqualify me for using more than one word. I will be replacing it shortly, and posting this in my portfolio separately.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A beautiful poem for the Bible Acrostic writing prompt. I've always loved the thought of the word of God being living water for our soul. You explained it perfectly in your poem. Good luck and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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A beautiful poem for the Bible Acrostic writing prompt. I've always loved the thought of the word of God being living water for our soul. You explained it perfectly in your poem. Good luck and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Unfortunately, I m changing it so they won't disqualify me for using more than one word. I will be replacing it shortly, and posting this in my portfolio separately.
