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Forbidden Fruit

The sin of Adam and Eve

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Comment from jessizero
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You did a good job reflecting on original sin in this acrostic Bible poem. I also liked the picture you supplied. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
    Thanks for the read and feedback.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the Bible Acrostic writing prompt. You did a very nice job on this poem . The only thing I think you need to check is whether you could be disqualified for having two words instead of just one. I heard from another writer that this was the case. I wish you good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
    I have seen other contests where an entry of two words or more was accepted. But thanks for the caution, I will try to check. Thanks for the read and feedback.