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The sin of Adam and Eve
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Comment from
jessizero
You did a good job reflecting on original sin in this acrostic Bible poem. I also liked the picture you supplied. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
Thanks for the read and feedback.
Comment from
Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Bible Acrostic writing prompt. You did a very nice job on this poem . The only thing I think you need to check is whether you could be disqualified for having two words instead of just one. I heard from another writer that this was the case. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
I have seen other contests where an entry of two words or more was accepted. But thanks for the caution, I will try to check. Thanks for the read and feedback.
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