Close Your Eyes
A 3 6 9 poem poem for the contest3 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Very enjoyable read...well constructed and offered the reader a sense of hope. Peace is around the bend for all of us. We must hold on! Perfect descriptive words for this ekphrastic. Best of luck with this entry!
Karenina
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Very enjoyable read...well constructed and offered the reader a sense of hope. Peace is around the bend for all of us. We must hold on! Perfect descriptive words for this ekphrastic. Best of luck with this entry!
Karenina
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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I?m glad you enjoyed a moment of peace with this poem. At the end of the day, we hold onto these feelings of peace and hope.
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Yes! I agree!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yes this is a serene homecoming here into a tropical paradise during the twilight hours, a romantic and faithful post June and I was riding on the wave home here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Yes this is a serene homecoming here into a tropical paradise during the twilight hours, a romantic and faithful post June and I was riding on the wave home here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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I?m glad you enjoyed a moment of peace with this poem. At the end of the day, we hold onto these feelings of peace and hope.
Comment from lyenochka
This is a lovely 3-6-9 poem. At first, it feels like the narrator is at a resort place and enjoy the colors of twilight and the sounds of the sea. But by the last stanza, we understand the the soothing feeling is due to approaching home. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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This is a lovely 3-6-9 poem. At first, it feels like the narrator is at a resort place and enjoy the colors of twilight and the sounds of the sea. But by the last stanza, we understand the the soothing feeling is due to approaching home. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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I?m glad you enjoyed a moment of peace with this poem. At the end of the day, we hold onto these feelings of peace and hope.