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Comment from Soledadpaz
Suggest: (expectant) mommy nerves. (Please no, not Tam!)
Maybe: Where (else) are you hurt?
Hmm, "last whore" makes me wonder if he means Tam. A slight against Morgan and Tam.
Ok, I stand corrected. Kelly is gone and looks like Anderson is the killer.
Sol
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Suggest: (expectant) mommy nerves. (Please no, not Tam!)
Maybe: Where (else) are you hurt?
Hmm, "last whore" makes me wonder if he means Tam. A slight against Morgan and Tam.
Ok, I stand corrected. Kelly is gone and looks like Anderson is the killer.
Sol
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Great fixes! Let?s finish this!
Comment from lyenochka
I remembered your first chapter and had to check in to see how your novel was going. I knew I couldn't stomach the violence in it but you kept your characters interesting and I'm sure you'll find a way for Morgan to end up saving himself and bringing justice in the end.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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I remembered your first chapter and had to check in to see how your novel was going. I knew I couldn't stomach the violence in it but you kept your characters interesting and I'm sure you'll find a way for Morgan to end up saving himself and bringing justice in the end.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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I appreciate the stop in! Yes, this serial killer story was graphic.
The last chapter isn?t quite going to be. Warm and fuzzy! Ha!
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This is a distraction. He has had in for Morgan forever.
He is doing this because Morgan got off and he really thinks Morgan did it. I am not fooled. The earring person is still out there. You do not fool me.
Karen
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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This is a distraction. He has had in for Morgan forever.
He is doing this because Morgan got off and he really thinks Morgan did it. I am not fooled. The earring person is still out there. You do not fool me.
Karen
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Damn girl. Yous a smart one.
Comment from Julie Helms
Poor Kelly!! She had finally gotten a real life.
Well written and high action/tension and good hook.
I didn't see any corrections apart from what's been mentioned.
Will tune in tomorrow!!
Julie
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Poor Kelly!! She had finally gotten a real life.
Well written and high action/tension and good hook.
I didn't see any corrections apart from what's been mentioned.
Will tune in tomorrow!!
Julie
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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I felt happy about the lack of errors!
Two chapters left. where could I possibly go . . .
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I am curious why the IA guy left Tamra alive. She's a witness to what he said and an alibi for Morgan....
Can't wait!
:-)
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Edit: You('re) the one (who) needs help..
Getting less and less likely, then, about Tamra:( although they could be working together of course). Do we know for certain she is in fact pregnant? There's no peace for the wicked in this book! And not long to go. Another excellent chapter, full of excitement. Well done, Doug! Debbie
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Edit: You('re) the one (who) needs help..
Getting less and less likely, then, about Tamra:( although they could be working together of course). Do we know for certain she is in fact pregnant? There's no peace for the wicked in this book! And not long to go. Another excellent chapter, full of excitement. Well done, Doug! Debbie
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Great fixes! You are tenacious on Tamra. Stay tuned . . .
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I had a strong feeling it was Anderson. You left a wonderful hook here. I am truly hoping Hutch shows up or some way Morgan gets out of this. He deserves to be happy with Tamra. Of course, I'm a hopeless romantic. I like this story.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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I had a strong feeling it was Anderson. You left a wonderful hook here. I am truly hoping Hutch shows up or some way Morgan gets out of this. He deserves to be happy with Tamra. Of course, I'm a hopeless romantic. I like this story.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Stay tuned . . .
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Nice writing.
I really thought Morgan would be more aware of the trap, at least have his gun in hand.
So, wounded Morgan will win the gunfight?
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Nice writing.
I really thought Morgan would be more aware of the trap, at least have his gun in hand.
So, wounded Morgan will win the gunfight?
Best wishes.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Stay tuned . . .
Comment from Terry Broxson
Anderson? I'm going to have hear the background on why Andereson hates Morgan so much. On the other hand, I don't like Morgan much, he didn't even stay with Tam till the ambulance got there.
I must have missed that Tam was pregnant. Makes me wonder if any of Morgan's hookers were pregnant too.
Good job. Terry.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Anderson? I'm going to have hear the background on why Andereson hates Morgan so much. On the other hand, I don't like Morgan much, he didn't even stay with Tam till the ambulance got there.
I must have missed that Tam was pregnant. Makes me wonder if any of Morgan's hookers were pregnant too.
Good job. Terry.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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But?where?s the twist? Oh yeah?.I still have two more chapters. Tune in?
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Ah-ha. I knew it. I told you so. Anyone with a hard-on for another party is the elevator that does go to the top, the least right bulb in the pack. And look, you have given member cents. Much appreciated! Sorry Kelly did not make it.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Ah-ha. I knew it. I told you so. Anyone with a hard-on for another party is the elevator that does go to the top, the least right bulb in the pack. And look, you have given member cents. Much appreciated! Sorry Kelly did not make it.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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But, there are still two chapters . . . hmmmmm
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I look forward to the next chapter