Silent Voices
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Call it Old Fashioned"Verses of personification
16 total reviews
Comment from GoWiSt
Interestingly apt picture art choice. Wow, what a knocker. What century is that from?
Nicely met the line and syllable count requirements of the 5-7-5 poem type/contest.
Good personification of opportunity knocking. I do like getting texts, however.
Good luck!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
  |
Interestingly apt picture art choice. Wow, what a knocker. What century is that from?
Nicely met the line and syllable count requirements of the 5-7-5 poem type/contest.
Good personification of opportunity knocking. I do like getting texts, however.
Good luck!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
-
Thank you so much! Xo
Comment from June Sargent
I totally agree. Some things in life just can't be delivered electronically. Great way to personify opportunity. Your book is very unique. And I'm enjoying the entries.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
|
I totally agree. Some things in life just can't be delivered electronically. Great way to personify opportunity. Your book is very unique. And I'm enjoying the entries.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
-
Thanks so much, June! Xo
-
Thanks so much, June! Xo
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Call it Old Fashioned, has the proper formatting and remembers that opportunity only knocks once. Then the e-mails begin and never end. .....................
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
|
This 5-7-5, Call it Old Fashioned, has the proper formatting and remembers that opportunity only knocks once. Then the e-mails begin and never end. .....................
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
-
Thank you, Bill!
-
Thank you, Bill!
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Jessica, I like your poem and its message. When opportunity knocks, hopefully we are listening. Your poem has good sensory appeal.
Great photo choice. Good 5-7-5 format. Well done. Margaret
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
|
Hi Jessica, I like your poem and its message. When opportunity knocks, hopefully we are listening. Your poem has good sensory appeal.
Great photo choice. Good 5-7-5 format. Well done. Margaret
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
-
Margaret, thank you a much!
-
Margaret, thank you a much!
Comment from royowen
Opportunity comes knocking indeed, with a pretty impressive door knocker on show. This is a pretty good entry in this poetry contest, beautifully written, good luck in the contest, well done Jessica, , blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
|
Opportunity comes knocking indeed, with a pretty impressive door knocker on show. This is a pretty good entry in this poetry contest, beautifully written, good luck in the contest, well done Jessica, , blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
-
Thanks so much, Roy!
-
Thanks so much, Roy!
-
Most welcome
-
Pleasure Jessica
Comment from jessizero
This was a great entry for the 5-7-5 poem contest. You got the syllable count right, and I liked your message about opportunity knocking. The "no text" part is clever! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
|
This was a great entry for the 5-7-5 poem contest. You got the syllable count right, and I liked your message about opportunity knocking. The "no text" part is clever! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
-
Thank you, Jessi!
-
Thank you, Jessi!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Many often choose to ignore a knock on the door, although sometimes it's God knocking. I'm a firm believer that we've come to rely too much on technology. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
|
Many often choose to ignore a knock on the door, although sometimes it's God knocking. I'm a firm believer that we've come to rely too much on technology. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
-
Thank you, Barbara!
-
Thank you, Barbara!
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written 575 for the contest and I wish you the very best of the contest. Sometimes I think people think they can get so much by sending a text when it would be so much better if they would just knock on the door and ask. Patricia.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
|
This is a very well written 575 for the contest and I wish you the very best of the contest. Sometimes I think people think they can get so much by sending a text when it would be so much better if they would just knock on the door and ask. Patricia.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
-
Very well said! Thank you so much! Xo
Comment from Ginda Simpson
This is so very cleverly told with words and the picture you chose. How often do we choose to not hear the knocking!!! What a great 5-7-5. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
|
This is so very cleverly told with words and the picture you chose. How often do we choose to not hear the knocking!!! What a great 5-7-5. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
-
Thank you so much! Xo
Comment from Sally Law
Oh, I just love this! How fresh and sassy! Modern stuff still doesn't replace the best stuff. Just showing up! Awesome addition to your fabulous book and contest entry. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes in the contest.
Sal Xoxo
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
|
Oh, I just love this! How fresh and sassy! Modern stuff still doesn't replace the best stuff. Just showing up! Awesome addition to your fabulous book and contest entry. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes in the contest.
Sal Xoxo
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
-
So true, my friend! Thank you! Xoxo