Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Carol, first of congratulations on your third place. It's a sweet little story about the little bunny with his sparkling ears. And then the big surprise. Ulla xcx

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024

Thanks, Ulla. Just a bit of amusement and fluff to "scare away" the ghosts that I've been hanging around with. Thanks so much for the kind comments.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Oh my goodness this would make a great cartoon. My kids used to watch stuff like this all the time.

Good luck in the competition. I think you may find yourself on the podium.

D

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024

Thanks, Doug. I thought the silly flsh was colorful and filled with a bit of excitement... a surprise party and lots of glitter.
Thanks so much.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was such a cute, sweet story! You included the magical animal and the key as was required for the contest. I loved the explosion of glitter. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024

Thanks Jess...I so loved the colorful setting to lighten the day and of course, the surprise party with glitter exploding everywhere. Just a bit of fun with this one.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from joann r romei

Excellent

Adorable, and the image at the end made me smile, everyone loves a surprise on their birthday or anytime for that matter, no errors noted and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024

Thanks so much for reading this silly flash fiction and smiling at the surprise. Just a bit of fun to lighten our day!
Smiles, Carol

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Tough thing here to tell a story with but 50 words, but you seem to have accomplished such!! Never would have thought of such a creature... glitter indeed! Great job and thanx for sharing! Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024

Thanks so much for taking the time to read this silly little 50 word flash. I thought the color pallet and the glitter would be fun for children to imagine. Appreciate your comments.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Very different, and a fun read in just a few sentences! The lesson is that things are not always what they seem - including bad things like feeling lonely .
Wendy

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024

Yes, a silly comical story to break the tension of the day. Can't do a lot with 50 words but make it colorful and hope you smile. Have a great day!

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

An excellent entry for the Magic 50 writing prompt. This was a fun story in only fifty words. It would make an excellent children's book character. The doll made to look like it could explode glitter everywhere. Kids would love it. Thaks for sharing. Good luck.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024

Thank you, Marilyn, for stopping by to read this silly flash fiction. I agree...the colorful bunny with exploding glitter ears would certainly make the children squeal with delight. Appreciate your kindness.

Comment from Bridge

Excellent

I thoroughly enjoyed your story. Congratulations on getting a complete story in 50 words. I love the picture of the bunny too. I wish you the very best in the contest.
With kind regards

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024

Thank you so much for stopping by to read this little flash fiction fantasy. Just a little 50 word bit of fun.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Yes, fantasy, but I think this one is more of the children's fantasy category, that way, fewer questions would be asked by the younger readers. Looking at it, in that way this will work fine for small children.

Good work.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024

Good morning! Just a bit of silliness with 50 words and adding some light heartedness to a dreary day. Thanks for reading the contest entry and for your kind comments.
Have a great day!

Comment from FurryBunny

Good

A heart warming tale for kids about a magical bunny who spreads joy and glitter at a surprise birthday celebration with his friends. Kids would absolutely love this story.

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 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024

Sorry it was only worth a four...but I agree it is difficult to put a full story in 50 words. At least, I hope it made you smile.
Have a great day!