The Key To Success!
Disqualified8 total reviews
Comment from joann r romei
This was great and most patents can remember teaching their children to tie shoe laces, what a great idea for this short short, no errors noted and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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This was great and most patents can remember teaching their children to tie shoe laces, what a great idea for this short short, no errors noted and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Disqualified. They said my key wasn?t real. Boom!
Comment from jessizero
Was this piece really disqualified??? I thought it was fun and amusing and had the required word count. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Was this piece really disqualified??? I thought it was fun and amusing and had the required word count. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Yep. Said the key had to be real and not imaginary. Still, a cute write-up!
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Well, that sucks. I'm sorry.
Comment from Begin Again
I think I made a face just like the one in the picture. LOL I've never heard it called the Rabbit ear method...sounds a bit painful to me. LOL If it works...it works!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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I think I made a face just like the one in the picture. LOL I've never heard it called the Rabbit ear method...sounds a bit painful to me. LOL If it works...it works!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Ha! Not too many people were taught this way, Carol. Fun contest.
Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan
Oh, dear! Poor bunny. Let's hope the magical bunny disappears next time Timmy's around haha.
A good, original story in so few words. Not easy to do. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Oh, dear! Poor bunny. Let's hope the magical bunny disappears next time Timmy's around haha.
A good, original story in so few words. Not easy to do. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Got DQ?d. Thanks for the review!
Comment from Mark Jackson
I was just beginning to think, no don't get I will move on when my eyes fell on the all-important note. I often ask people to add a little note if they use something a little out of the ordinary or quote something. Here I did not get your reference but you added a not and get 5 stars for it. I do remember something about running around and then down the rabbit hole.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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I was just beginning to think, no don't get I will move on when my eyes fell on the all-important note. I often ask people to add a little note if they use something a little out of the ordinary or quote something. Here I did not get your reference but you added a not and get 5 stars for it. I do remember something about running around and then down the rabbit hole.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Got DQ?d. Thanks for the review!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This is a cute 50 word story for the writing prompt. The twist ending is surprising and a good ending. I did not presonally know the story about the rabbit and trying shoes but after I read the explanation I got it. Nicely done. good luck.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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This is a cute 50 word story for the writing prompt. The twist ending is surprising and a good ending. I did not presonally know the story about the rabbit and trying shoes but after I read the explanation I got it. Nicely done. good luck.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Got DQ?d. Thanks for the review!
Comment from Bill Schott
This story, The Key to Success, takes me all the way back to being a kid. My sister first tried to show me, but she gave up when I was initially unsuccessful. My brother then tried, but he too quit almost immediately. I finally learned by watching Captain Kangaroo.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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This story, The Key to Success, takes me all the way back to being a kid. My sister first tried to show me, but she gave up when I was initially unsuccessful. My brother then tried, but he too quit almost immediately. I finally learned by watching Captain Kangaroo.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Got DQ?d. Thanks for the review!
Comment from Bridge
I enjoyed the story. It is really difficult to write a story in so few words but you managed to do so very well. Very well written. I wish you the very best in the contest.
With kind regards
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed the story. It is really difficult to write a story in so few words but you managed to do so very well. Very well written. I wish you the very best in the contest.
With kind regards
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Got DQ?d. Thanks for the review!
