Different View
A monostich about viewing world.3 total reviews
Comment from Mark Jackson
Sorry but the contest does state your monostich must be on a single line. I wrote it that way to stop entries emulating Walt Whitman's Leaves of Grass.
I would suggest using a smaller font or removing a word or two maybe both. Good luck.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Sorry but the contest does state your monostich must be on a single line. I wrote it that way to stop entries emulating Walt Whitman's Leaves of Grass.
I would suggest using a smaller font or removing a word or two maybe both. Good luck.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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I thought about that. To me a single line means one sentence. Maybe I'm wrong in this. I will go back in and change it though. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Monostitch writing prompt. I like this one sentence poem as well as the artwork chosen to present it with. Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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An excellent entry for the Monostitch writing prompt. I like this one sentence poem as well as the artwork chosen to present it with. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you. Your comments are truly appreciated. I will need all the luck I can get.
Comment from jessizero
This seems like a great monostitch poem. I wish we could all see the world with our hearts instead of our eyes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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This seems like a great monostitch poem. I wish we could all see the world with our hearts instead of our eyes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you. As always I appreciate your taking the time to read and comment on my writing.