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A Monostich Poem6 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Nice thought, though I do not know if I agree. The trouble with these little poems is that you really have no ability to flesh out an idea. You did not say in author notes where this picture came from. Karen :-)
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Nice thought, though I do not know if I agree. The trouble with these little poems is that you really have no ability to flesh out an idea. You did not say in author notes where this picture came from. Karen :-)
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I can relate to your important poem. It is well written and tells a story that we can all understand. Within us are very good things, for the most part. Whenever we get to the hearts and minds of people, we can see their best if we try.
Well written and presented!
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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I can relate to your important poem. It is well written and tells a story that we can all understand. Within us are very good things, for the most part. Whenever we get to the hearts and minds of people, we can see their best if we try.
Well written and presented!
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thank you so very much
Comment from jessizero
I think this was a great monostich poem. The poem was beautiful and brief, which isn't always an easy accomplishment. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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I think this was a great monostich poem. The poem was beautiful and brief, which isn't always an easy accomplishment. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from Mark Jackson
I am not sure how to read this. In our heart's that is a possessive 's' but minds is plural. No I am not quite getting it, did you mean Hearts and Minds. That is easier to understand. I struggle with apostrophes especially its and it's. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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I am not sure how to read this. In our heart's that is a possessive 's' but minds is plural. No I am not quite getting it, did you mean Hearts and Minds. That is easier to understand. I struggle with apostrophes especially its and it's. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Beauty has a habit of coming to the fore in many ways, with flowers and smiling faces, we see the beauty beyond the surface and also seek it, a fine post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Beauty has a habit of coming to the fore in many ways, with flowers and smiling faces, we see the beauty beyond the surface and also seek it, a fine post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from Brandi Radaker
For a one line poem, this is great. It is a great reminder for the dark days and fully rings true. It says a lot in so little and I think it was well executed. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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For a one line poem, this is great. It is a great reminder for the dark days and fully rings true. It says a lot in so little and I think it was well executed. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thank you so very much