Silent Voices
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Begin"Verses of personification
8 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Its promise may be nothing in terms of no heartache or pain but it may be everything in terms of peace and tranquillity. A thoughtful one. Sending best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Its promise may be nothing in terms of no heartache or pain but it may be everything in terms of peace and tranquillity. A thoughtful one. Sending best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much! Xo
Comment from Sally Law
This is really fantastic, mystery poet. A semi blank canvas of green feeds the imagination. Beautifully written and illustrated in monoku poetry.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes in the contest.
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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This is really fantastic, mystery poet. A semi blank canvas of green feeds the imagination. Beautifully written and illustrated in monoku poetry.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes in the contest.
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much! Xo
Comment from jaded831
Very profound, I read your poem over and over again, your words intrigue me. A landscape is beautiful just by being which says a great deal, yet it expects nothing. You creatively weaved a zen monostich poem.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Very profound, I read your poem over and over again, your words intrigue me. A landscape is beautiful just by being which says a great deal, yet it expects nothing. You creatively weaved a zen monostich poem.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much! Xo
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This beautiful image brought me in to read the poem that's also beautiful. It's always amazing how nature is so perfect. You do this landscape well with your vivid words and clear description. Thank you for sharing this.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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This beautiful image brought me in to read the poem that's also beautiful. It's always amazing how nature is so perfect. You do this landscape well with your vivid words and clear description. Thank you for sharing this.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much! Xo
Comment from Mark Jackson
Hello, I set this contest so I know when I said write a monostich that consists of a single line I actually meant literally a single line. You have gone over onto two lines, You might be able to adjust the font to get it to fit. I am not on the compliance committee so I do not know if they will interpret my instructions so you may be alright if you want to risk it.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Hello, I set this contest so I know when I said write a monostich that consists of a single line I actually meant literally a single line. You have gone over onto two lines, You might be able to adjust the font to get it to fit. I am not on the compliance committee so I do not know if they will interpret my instructions so you may be alright if you want to risk it.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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All fixed! Thank you for the heads up!
Xo
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed this simplistic yet appropriate write, those wide open spaces draw us in as we enjoy the freedom of nothingness, a fine post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed this simplistic yet appropriate write, those wide open spaces draw us in as we enjoy the freedom of nothingness, a fine post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much! Xo
Comment from Douglas Goff
Okay. Reviewing these is hard because they are so short. I have seen a couple of these and yours is at the top.
It seems like something a famous poet could have written.
Great job and good luck!
D
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Okay. Reviewing these is hard because they are so short. I have seen a couple of these and yours is at the top.
It seems like something a famous poet could have written.
Great job and good luck!
D
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much, Douglas! Xo
Comment from Brandi Radaker
In so few words, this piece is moving and relatable. I also like that it is thought provoking. The meaning has a mix of light and darkness that makes it intriguing. It is a lovely poem and I wish you the best.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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In so few words, this piece is moving and relatable. I also like that it is thought provoking. The meaning has a mix of light and darkness that makes it intriguing. It is a lovely poem and I wish you the best.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much! Xo