Comment from E.P. Mackey

Excellent

Woah, very steamy! Incredible how much you can say in so few words. If only I could find someone to describe me in such a way lol! Nice little poem, I enjoyed :)

 Comment Written 15-May-2024

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Well, it sounds like she's a keeper. As long as she's not insane.
Good use of the letter "T", and each line holds true to the subject of the title in describing just why she's so memorable and what she does.

This is solid entry. Good luck.

 Comment Written 15-May-2024

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This sounds like a mutually physical and warm encounter and I enjoyed the alliteration here for the contest. I welcome you to Fanstory Melissa, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 15-May-2024

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

nice four-line poem
like the 't' alliteration
smooth flow throughout
syllable count is spot on
i have no suggestions
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)

 Comment Written 15-May-2024

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reply by the author on 15-May-2024

Thank you so much Shelley for your kind words!

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

What a wonderful read/poem, your use of alliteration is great as you take the reader on a very sensual journey, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 15-May-2024

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reply by the author on 15-May-2024

Thank you so much for your kind feedback!