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Sleeping in

Staying in dream land for just a little longer

2 total reviews 
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
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In this tiptoe sleepy gray room,

Her heart postpones the day,

Between alarms her dreams resume,

As she holds all her problems at bay

Love this!! Flows very nicely

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
    Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Comment from RodG
Excellent
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Good description of the bedroom as "tiptoe gray."
We SEE this woman sleeping through alarms, obviously very content with her dreams.
The ABAB rhymes are well-chosen.
Rod

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
    Thanks so much for reading it and taking the time to respond.