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2024 Japanese Poetry

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Comment from Rachelle Allen
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This is so true. When you've passed, your loved ones will not be sitting around saying, "Didn't she have the most fabulous car?" They're going to remember the way you made them feel loved. It's ALL about love!

Nice way to drive the point home, Gypsy. Very nicely done. xoxo

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much, Rachelle

    Gypsy ❤️
Comment from Neonewman
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This is a mesmerizing work of artistry, combining words and artwork. I was captured by its beauty. Stunning work, my friend.
Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much, Steve. Bless you too.

    Gypsy
reply by Neonewman on 02-Jul-2024
    My pleasure.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Such a beautiful description of the artwork you chose to go with this poem. This beautiful lady is what I imagine you look like. Thank you for sharing both with us. I enjoyed reading.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
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wow! you described the picture perfectly
love the skin caressed by a jasmine breeze playing with her moonless night hair!
the last line is a great ending lighting up with love...
excellent ekphrastic gogyohka with smooth flow...
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review.

    Gypsy ❤️
Comment from juliaSjames
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Gorgeous pen picture of the beautiful image. Everything conveys an atmosphere of sultry passion. " moonless night hair" is an inspired detail. The poem flows easily to the enigmatic conclusion.

Thanks for sharing, MariVal

Blessings, Cheryl

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much, Cheryl 😊 🙏

    Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
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She is very beautiful, and her beauty is enhanced by your words. Elegant and sophisticated lady with a touch of mystery.I wonder sho is the lover she is thinking about, and when he might return. Thanks for sharing.
RJ

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
    Thank you, RJ

    Gypsy
reply by RJ Heritage on 02-Jul-2024
    You're welcome
Comment from lyenochka
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I'm glad that you choose love. In the Epistles of John, he emphasizes Love above all.

A lovely picture and Gogyohka poem of choosing the best in life!

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
    Yes, love above all, so true.

    Thank you very much, big sister.

    Love

    Marival
Comment from nancyjam
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You chose beautiful words for this lovely Ekphrastic Poem. They fit
the picture perfectly with appealing imagery.
I loved "caressed by jasmine breeze"
Nancy

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy
Comment from Colorado Owl
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This is the first ekphrastic poem that I've read. I love it! The picture is glorious and your poem is just as beautiful. Your last line is my favorite... "light up the pond with love." Well done.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy